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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: uma88
Nice prologue and good start azra, waiting to see what scares madhu this much, and i guess this handsome boy is Rishab, let me wait for the next update. Thanks for the pm

thanx uma di !!!! 😃

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Madhubala forum the place where we all enjoyed the epic love saga of Superstar RK and Madhubala. At present our forum seems a bit dull because show got finished long back, so to make our forum lively again and ignite the passion of epic Rishbala Love Story we have come up with this OS Contest. As we all know because of the fanfictions of our MB forum we still enjoy our Rishabala in different avtars, our talented writers constantly keep reminding us about the epic saga by their stories and the readers keep encouraging them by their beautiful comments. This contest will be a chance to enjoy all shades of Rishabala again. Hope everyone will enjoy and relive Rishbala Era again.

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Rules

1. Story should be on Rishbala only no other couples like Sulbala and Rajbala will be allowed. Moreover it is MEIEJ Forum contest only. 2. It is THEME base OS COMPETITION so for that we will provide some Story TITLES from which participants need to choose one considering it's meaning they have to write An OS. 3. No Word Limit but OS should be neither very long nor very short. 4. No need to give another title to OS just mention the title you choose. 5. If you use any song as a dance sequence or something, kindly mention the film name also so that readers can easily connect with it and your story too. 6. No plagiarized Stories will be taken like story of other writers or from other website. If we find such malpractice contestant will be disqualified and prior actions will be taken by Moderation. 7. The OS you send for entry must be newly written and it should never have been posted on any forum. 8. Voting will be done by readers and judges consideration. 9. Do not ask for votes via Private Messages to your close friends in the forum.

Titles

1.Forbidden tale of love.

2.The crazy couple.

3.The one that got away.

4.Ransom with love.

5.In the heat of moment.

Participation procedure

Every participant will have to select ONE TITLE and write an OS which is realated to the title.No need of making banners for OS or adding pictures in between the OS Participants will have to send their entry to either Username My_VivJaan or AzraZaidi. (Suru or Azra) PM title should be ENTRY FOR OS CONTEST no other titled pms will be accepted. The last date to send entry is @@/06/15, 11:59pm IST after that entries wouldn't be accepted.

Edited by AzraZaidi - 8 years ago

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 4ever4love
I like it!!!! Interesting and mysterious.

thanx alot !!!😃😃

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Prettyliars
Great start

thank u 😉

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mahimesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update 😃

nice start ,,,,,waiting for the next update ...😃

and thanx for pm 😃

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimesha
awesome update 😃
nice start ,,,,,waiting for the next update ...😃
and thanx for pm 😃

thanx , Will update tmrw 😊

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28
hey congrts fr new stry
awsm strt ...lykn d concpt...
pls updte soon

thanx ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
Awesome start...

thanx 😃😃

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi everyone ,

I am every happy that you all liked it 😃😃 thanx for liking it and commenting it means alot !!!

Here is the 2nd update , Hope you all enjoy it !!!

So this update is dedicated to my crazy nautanki gang Buaji , DM , LB , ED , DD 😉

PART 2

When Roma reached the house she was shocked to see the door unlocked she remembered locking it properly she got worried for madhu she rushed to her and felt relief when she saw madhu reading a book laying on the bed. "Madhu I am glad you are Ok, I got so worried seeing the door unlocked Who came?" "I dont know a boy came with a bag and directly went upstairs" "Did he see you???" "No, he dint see me, when i heard some noise I thought you have returned , but then I saw him , he was climbing stairs. Seeing him I came back to the room and sat here, after that I didn't hear anything." "I guess that was Rishab . he was supposed to return today" "Oh he is the elder son right!!" "Yes he is, now Madhu you have to be very careful I dont want to get you in any trouble" "I wont get in any trouble dont worry that much, if also I get caught and they ask me to leave the house we can sell my laptop and do the arrangements ,by the way the laptop will not be in use for me until I start my studies" "No Madhu don't even think of doing that , your studies are the first priority for me. If its about your living arrangement I have savings by which we can surely rent a nice place to live or we can put you in a hostel if you want. As far as I remember the last three years you were in hostel in Delhi." "Yes I was in hostel but I hated it I want to live with you no matter how many problems we face please." "I also want to stay with you beta but I really hope Radhaji lets you stay here with me . She is a very kind hearted lady like I really have very high hopes with her . And now let me go and check on Rishab if he needs anything" "Okay you go."

Roma went to Rishab's room and knocked twice there was no response, she thought he must have slept . She returned back to go to her room when she heard the door open "Roma Tai you here?" "Yes beta I wanted to ask you if you had your dinner or would you like to eat something" "No need, I had my dinner on the way but you are here as I remember you were supposed to go on a week leave. You said you were going to the village right" "Yes I went to village but I returned back yesterday night" "Oh!! good I was worried about eating food from outside and did you meet the girl, whom you always talk about" Roma got tensed hearing this question everyone in this house knew about Madhu as she always kept talking about her,she was scared to tell Rishab that she had brought Madhu here. She had no idea how he would react. "Roma Tai where are you lost you look worried " "No its nothing" "If there is something you can tell me. We are like family right" "Yes Rishab there is a problem . I will talk to you after Radhaji returns" "If there is anything I can do let me know" "God bless you beta and how was your trip?" "My trip was good but you know the models keep throwing tantrums and I find it very difficult to keep calm. I have some pending work will complete it and sleep but it would be good if you could give me coffee" "Ok I will bring coffee" Roma said.

Roma went to the kitchen and started making coffee. She was in a dilemma of telling Rishab about Madhu or not she knew that Rishab was a very good boy, he had always helped her he never treated her like a maid , he always regarded her as a family member but Roma didn't want to take any risk. She wanted to wait till Radha returns if they don't allow Madhu to live with her Roma has decided to move out of the house and live with Madhu somewhere else. Roma made the coffee and went to give Rishab upstairs "Rishab beta here is your coffee" "Thanx Roma Tai this was much needed" "But sleep soon" "I will" .

Madhu waited in the room for Roma to come but she was late and Madhu slept reading the book. When Roma came Madhu was already sleeping ,she kissed Madhu on her forehead, took a bed sheet and spread on the floor and slept as the bed was a small one two people couldn't sleep on it. Here Rishab was doing his work it was late night and he was feeling sleepy, the coffee Roma brought for him had become cold. He decided to reheat it and drink it.

Rishab took the mug of coffee and went to the kitchen to reheat it. He had to submit the pictures for the magazine tomorrow in the evening but he knew that if he would sleep now he will not be able to complete the work. He also had one more shoot day after tomorrow . This week had a very hectic schedule for him. After reheating the coffee he was going back to his room. On the other hand Madhu woke up she felt thirsty the jug in the room was empty, she thought the boy has returned today only he must be sleeping I can go and bring water myself why wake up Roma. She decided to go the kitchen. When Rishab was almost at the top of the stairs he heard some noise , he turned back to see what it was. He was shocked to see a girl, how could someone enter his house at this time he thought .He took out his mobile from the pocket to check the time it was late midnight again he turned to see the girl but the girl has disappeared. He thought he is very tired and is working on the pictures of the models thats why his mind is playing tricks but the girl was lt more beautiful than models. He decided to complete his work quickly and sleep. Here Madhu filled the jug and went back unaware of the confusion she put Rishab in.

Madhu got up in the morning only to find Roma missing she thought Roma must have went to cook. She slowly got to the door and opened it a little she couldn't see anything she slowly tip toed of the room and stood hiding behind the pillar. The boy she saw yesterday was sitting on the table and was having his breakfast with Roma. "How could Tai eat with that boy when I am here, I will get angry on her once she comes to the room" Rishab felt some movement near the pillar but there was nothing. After the breakfast Rishab went to submit his work and Roma came to room with breakfast for Madhu "Come Madhu have breakfast " "No I don't want to eat any thing " "Madhu what happened " "Did you eat your breakfast" "Oh now I understand, you are angry on me that I had my breakfast but Madhu how do you know?" Roma asked. Madhu started to think for a reason as she couldn't tell that she came out. "You brought only one plate so I guessed" "Beta he was not willing to eat alone so I also ate with him. Now don't be a kid and eat" "Only if you feed me with your hands" "I would love to" Roma replied. After feeding Madhu Roma went to the terrace to get the pickle. Madhu came to the hall searching for Roma, at the same time Rishab came home he had forgotten some important things in hi s room He parked the car and was going in the house when he again saw the girl near the stairs. He started rushing then the watchman called him. "What happened ???" He asked getting irritated. "Sir you forgot your keys at the car" "Thank you " Rishab replied and turned to see the girl but she again disappeared. Rishab felt like kicking himself why did he have to forget the keys but he was confused, was the girl real? Rishab went to his room and took the things for which he came, he saw the balcony door open he went to close it but again he saw the girl in the backyard near his mother's rose plant. She was admiring them. He left everything and ran downstairs and went to the back door as it was the entrance for the backyard. He pushed the door and realized that he is lucky this time as the girl was real and was standing near the rose plant.

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Edited by AzraZaidi - 9 years ago

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SuRu

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Posted: 9 years ago

unres...

Yipppeee Congosss to me... i m first to comment...🥳

coming to update it was awesomeee... hide and seek going on between rishbala eagerly waiting for their first meeting...

about that boy climbing stairs we all were right he is our own handsome darling cutie drool worthy photographer RK...😳❤️

poor he so confused like you my confused soul did he saw a girl or not as everytime madhu disappear...😆😆

lastly he caught her in garden area...yayyy excited for next part dear... update soon dont make us wait for long coz now u dont have any reason also... you are free exams over...😛😉

lastly i m angry on you for calling me that you know what😡😡

you got save this time as didnt find out any good scary pic but next time will not spare you... 🤣

A Big Thanks for Dedication... 🤗 🤗

Edited by My_VivJaan - 9 years ago

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sorry sorry sorry !!!! Sorry yaar u unresed so i forgot abt. plese dont send the scary sticker to me next timee , its so scary

Thanx alot dear , it is bcoz of u only that i have started this SS😳😳😳

So u are cheating my style (color code) but i like it 😉

I am glad u loved the prologue lines , you know when i was pasting them in the update it just clicked that i could join them and then you see the result !!!!!

I am so glad u liked everything !!! You kept me w8ing to UNRES and i kept u w8ing to reply

so hisab barabar 😆

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

FOR YOUR FIRST SS AND NEW STORY...

SO STARTING FROM YOUR IMPATIENCE MY SOUL FOR UPDATING YOUR SS... HOW YOU WROTE IT AT LATE NIGHT😉

SO PROLOGUE LINES I REALLY LOVED IT... SPECIALLY WHEN YOU MERGED TITLE WITH IT PERFECT GO...👏👏

COMING TO STORY SO HERE MY CUTE SOUL TRYING TO WRITE TO WRITE SERIOUS STORY AND GUESS WHAT YOU ROCKED IN IT TOO DEAR...😳😃

MADHU'S RICH FAMILY PAST SEEMS VERY INTERESTING AND BOND BETWEEN ROMA AND HER I LOVED IT...😃

SO NOW MADHU LIVING IN RK'S HOUSE ACC TO INTRO OF RADHA AND HER TWO SONS...

MOST INTERESTING THING IN IT IS RK IS PHOTOGRAPHER IF I M RIGHT AS U SAID TWO SONS NA THA'T'S WHY...😉

SO OUR HERO HAD MADE ENTRY IN HOME I M WAITING FOR THEIR FIRST MEETING AND HOW THEY WILL BE WITH EACH OTHER...

OVERALL AN AWESOME CONCEPT JAAN... INTEERESTING ONE...👏👏

AND YEAH AS I TOLD YOU AFTER WAKING UP WILL FIRST UNRES MY CMMNT SO SEE HERE I AM...😳😳

AND ALSO READ YOUR REPLY ON FIL SO ME TOO CHOSE A COLOR CODE FOR YOU... HOPE U WILL LIKE IT😉

LOVE YA MY LOVELY SOUL...🤗❤️

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