Posted: 9 years ago
 👏Edited by vks11 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Truly amazing! It was beautiful the way you have showed their emotions. Loved the way you have kept it real. Hope to read it, as it continues into a SS. 

Looking forward to their journey together for a better future with their growth in understanding, trust & how they learn to stand by each other in all walks of life.
Edited by inamajar - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
That was wonderful yet beautiful OS...

These are the things we often spot on married couple's life... but the way you wrote the ending part was too marvelous...


But i really wish to read how they made up their future together and how happy they are with their second chance in their marital life...

Edited by honey-sweety - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
It was beautiful. I loved how there was this touch of melancholia to the entire story and a sense of wistfulness infused into the words...very beautifully written. Will be waiting for the short story :)
Posted: 9 years ago
This is so realistic it could be any married couple's story.
Aren't most marriages live cum arranged in our culture?
And don't almost all marriages go through highs and lows?
We do tend to take each other for granted after a few years.
And forget the fact that all relationships need hard work to make them work, specially that between a husband and a wife.
Loved how their love is still there, they have just forgotten to look for it.
Looking forward to reading the rest of this story, Jigs.
Love you for keeping it natural and realistic! 
Posted: 9 years ago
A very beautiful portrayal of how a married couple become complacent and drift apart sometimes. The love and friendship just becomes foggy with certain circumstances in life. However, with a little effort from both, they can soon get clarity and continue their journey of a happy marriage. Very realistic OS and loved how you built the emotions of both Arnav and Khushi. Their need for each other never diminished and that makes things hopeful in a marriage... 😃
Posted: 9 years ago
That was a good OS Jigs.
Dealing with what really happens between the couples over a period of time is quite tough as by then both would have been set in their opinion. Thats when the equation of give and take comes into play...

 

Waiting for the SS...
Edited by rulama - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Simple & realistic take on marriage.
Loved it.
Posted: 9 years ago
This is so beautiful! 

They are surrounded by all sorts of uncertainties and insecurities...yet when they sit together, it dissipates the whole darkness which surrounds them and fills them with Hope...

Loved it! and would like to read more on this...
Posted: 9 years ago
this is so beautiful thanks for the pm x

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