Hey Sis,
The part was awesome. You've left me awestruck with the choice of song. It so clearly depicted the inner turmoil of Zoya & how she needed her love to get out of all the mess. I don't think there's any better song to depict her troubled thoughts & grief.
The scene was written so perfectly. Both of them fighting their inner battles, their conscience which was leading them to each other. Oh I had tears in my eyes seeing the pain both of them are experiencing. Asad despite having seen her remembers nothing but feels that pull constricting his chest everytime he hears or sees her & she who hasn't had a glimpse of him feels his essence, his smell, his voice but still is confused as to how that was possible.
Sis, you're a genius. You've portrayed their turmoil so well. I am loving it.
Dilshad was right, sometimes you can connect with a stranger better than you could with your family members. It was really kind of her to ask Zoe to share her pain. At least because of that Zoe, involuntarily, gave out about having loved & still loving & living for one person, who she has lost.
Waiting for her friends to join them at the party. Please update soon. like really soon.
Congrats on the new thread. Thank you for the double updates.
Love..
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