Part 4-13/1/15 KRIYAMSHAREY SS:"Kuch bhi hojaye, Am always there - Page 3

Posted: 9 years ago
Dia...🤗🤗🤗
Forget about the concept...its Kriyam...kriyam...kriyam...
I loved the start...the bond they share has always been adorable!
Swayam's love and are for Kriya...loved it!
Her words were too harsha...but sometimes anger rides over your actual feelings...I'm sure Kriya is as hurt as Swayam!
The dance was wonderfully described...the emotions were beautifully entwined into it!
Loving this one!
Whoever that person is...I hate him! He wants to kill both😡
He can be Swayam's bro or cousin...something to do with property cause Swayam wouldn't interfere in anyone's life to create some problems or grudge!
Continue soooniiish!
Posted: 9 years ago
bhai bhan kab baneee
 
nice OS
Posted: 9 years ago
amazing and brilliant concept and chapter... do continue soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing concept...
Loved it
Update soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Omg 
What was that
Koi sw ko marna chahta he
N jo bhi uski life me aayga  use marna paega
what the hell
 Love kriyam bonding very much
N plz update next part soon
Warna exam ke time pe bhi sochti rahugi ki
Kya hoga aaghe
Posted: 9 years ago
And someone told me that comments are hardly 2-3😡
Posted: 9 years ago
kriyam story 😃 
amazing concept
lovely kriyam bond
waiting for ur update
update soon
Posted: 9 years ago
wat an amazing concept...just luved the way you described each n evey thing...the dance part was really well portrayed (Y)
plz update d nxt part soon
eagerly w8ing :D
Edited by riachawlalko - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
wat an amazing concept...just luved the way you described each n evey thing...the dance part was really well portrayed (Y)
plz update d nxt part soon
eagerly w8ing :D
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow that was simply amazing diya... 
First time I am reading a story on Kriyam n so happy reading coz Kriyam is my favorite after kriyaansh... 
Superb start it was... loved the way u showed swayam's n kriya's emotions n like always there is a twist in ur story...That makes me more eager to know what will happen next... 
I have a feeling that the mysterious guy is Rey... Revenge jaisa kuch lena aayega aur hamari sweet kriya se pyaar kar bhaitega... Hehehe... Me always landup at kr...Does this story have kr as well ?
So plz update soon !!
Sorry for the late reply...
Edited by ..ANVESHA.. - 9 years ago

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