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Part 4-13/1/15 KRIYAMSHAREY SS:"Kuch bhi hojaye, Am always there - Page 4

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Khizar_SWARON
Khizar Ali @Khizar_SWARON Senior Member
Anniversary 9 Group Promotion 2
Posted: 9 years ago
WOW great SS on KriYam the sorrow, the dance, the joy, the sadness, the hurt, the bond of brother and sister, the bond of dance with them, the love of sister and brother, the protectiveness and THE SUSPENSE in the end for who is the mysterious guy/girl (it's a guy right?)
Great story, concept and writing like all your work
Thanks for the pm and do update soon 
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DD_Tannufan
karthika @DD_Tannufan Goldie
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 3 Commentator 1
Posted: 9 years ago
love u sweety and love ur writing ...🤗
i have never seen kriyam penned down so beautiully ..

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-Monika-
-Monika- @-Monika- Senior Member Inactive
Anniversary 10 Group Promotion 2 Networker 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome concept...

damn interesting...

loved it...

continue soon...
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Dead_Nightmare
Blackheart @Dead_Nightmare IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 5 Networker 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome starting
Sweetipe love that so much
Kriya fight for her dance but swayam didn't allow
Best friend as best brother and sister
Kriyam bonding amazing loved it
Swayam dance his emmotion and the fight again world nycly described
Loved it
Who is the person he is rey or else update next part soon
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..MiStLeToE..
Chitra. @..MiStLeToE.. IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 10 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing!The concept is quite exciting :)Swayam's dance was potrayed was beautifully. . .And KriYam's connection. . .their love and care for each other too!Someone wants to see Swayam in pain ad he will use Kriya for his mission. . .Too much suspense 😊
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sharif_lafungi
akanksha @sharif_lafungi IF-Sizzlerz Inactive
Anniversary 10 Group Promotion 6 + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by -RuthShalini-


diya this is fabulous...
amaxing concept...
very well described ...specially dance...
m hell excited...update soon
p.s copy paste from akankshaArsha is done🤣🤣
Res👏
Loved it!👏
Remind me to unres on 28th
nd this copypaste Anushka8722
but my date is different🤣

aae copycat
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athi_vrushan
athi_vrushan @athi_vrushan Goldie
Anniversary 9 Group Promotion 3 Networker 1
Posted: 9 years ago
nice concept diyu
kriyam bond revisited
<3d the way u described their bond
do continue
wud <3 to know more abt swayam and his dance ka relation
swayam-the protective brother was a treat to read
plz pm or scrap me when u update the next part
love you chotu
from ur di🤗
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nature-beauty
nature-beauty @nature-beauty IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
nice one diya👏
i want ShaRey SS also if possible
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anuaskif
Anupriya @anuaskif Senior Member
Anniversary 9 Group Promotion 2 + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Ok I am sorry for being late... got a little busy with work...

Wowww Kiddo... This one's a very promising plot... I am already too eager for the next update...

Swayam's emotions were so beautifully expressed, my heart went out for him 👍🏼

Update soon 👏
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arsha_simran
arsha_simran @arsha_simran IF-Dazzler Inactive
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 4 + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
This is something really different!!!
Nice going!!!
The way it all started... Their fight...
Gosh kriyam and fight noo...
And those words.. Soo pricking!!!
And the dance!!! Perfect!!! All those moves emotions!!!! Woowww!!!
Sooo could feel it!!!
And finally they became one!!! Kriyam!!! ^_^
And upon that the end... Baap re.. Who is that person.. Arrgghhh
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