You are writing Yudhistir's POV. It is a nice job that you have taken up Urmila. Yudhi is a character beyond my comprehension and I have a deep mistake in my heart for all his qualities. Somewhere I an relate to him for not speaking untruth. Speaking only truth is seen as a hazard to life which I also hv. But unfortunately the evils of life hv caught up with me very fast.
Urmila I have some requests-
1. Please show his wife Devika in the POV.
2. Highlight his happiness, pain and guilt equally.
3. Please highlight his reflections on Mahabharat Yudh and the aftermath.
4. Please highlight on his relationship with Draupadi.
5. Give some space to Nakul and Sahdev. They were among knowledgeable persons of that era.
6. Do highlight on Pandu.
7. Do highlight on Yudi's relationship with Karna, Dhritarashtra, Bhisma and Vidur pre-war and post-war.
8. Don't show Bheem as a laddu maniac.
Continue soon...
Edited by Yajnaseni - 9 years ago
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