hey guyz!
"my first fanfic" was a fic by a very old member of this forum aditya_rikh but he didn't complete this fic !day b4 yesterday i just went through this fic and have to say its awesum!something very different!so i was interested in continuing this fic so i just pmed him and he has given me the permission!
this fanfic is a remix--fusion--india calling fanfic!obviously the original theme of this fic is by aditya!so a huge round of applause for him personally by me coz this idea is awesum!i hope all of u r interested as earlier when aditya strted off with this fic!but still if u all dun like the masala of remix in this fic then i won't continue it so do write ur views!
here is the indroduction of remix for those who didn't watch it earlier and the first part of this fic by our old member aditya_rikh!
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now a brief
introduction of remix to all of you who doesn't know much about it.
those who know can continue from the next paragraph.
it is astory set on the backdrop of a school for rich but scholarships
are also offered to the poorer students .four protagonists (ashi,yuvi,tia,
ranveer)play in a band called remix ,ASHI daughter of a super star single
mom.YUVI-son OF A POLITICIAN, is a music freak, loves ashi.
TIA-plays a self obsessed teenager who is caring about her friends
and a total romantic she loves ranveer.RANVEER-possibly the best
looking guy in the school ,his character is also a total romantic,loves tia
but just can't get along with her courtesy some ppl,comesfrom a poor family
there are other characters which obviously involves students of the school(maurya high)
now the charactersin my story will be VRINDA ,friend of ashi sweetest girl you'll ever see
(playedby the same girl who is playing smita in I.C. ) .MEHER and PRI -tia's angels
these girls play the part of tia's friends.meher -quite a beautiful girl
who carries herself very well.pri is an overweight girl-tia's best friend.SIDD
-a rank joker ,is dating meher and a popular dude in school.best friend
of yuvi.VARUN-has changed in the story from a nerd to a stud,ranveer's friend
LATIKA-principal's dughter and a total loser kind of vamp.MR. JAMWAL-
principal of the school and latika's father.GLORIA-p.a to mr jamwal.
now i'm starting the story.everything in ( ) will be things whichppl think
in their minds.
the story starts in the khanna mansion...............
vishesh,dadaji and adi on the breakfast table.dadaji is seen saying
something to adi in actions.
VISHESH-dadaji ,yeh kya khichdi pakate rehten hain aap log haan,hoon adi
kya baat hai,kabhi,kabhi apne bhai se bhi apne dil ki baatein kar liya karo.
ADI-bhaiya,aap bhi na yeh dil wil ki baat and all that ,yeh adi ka style
nahin hai,yeh ityadiyon ka style hain,you know na adi rocks.
DADAJI-haan ,vishesh hum toh bas soch rahe the ki kyon na aaj sab bahar dinner
karein,bahu ko bhi kaam se thodi fursat mil jayegi.
meanwhile kamini enters ....
KAMINI-dadaji aap bhi na bilkul bacchon jaisi baatein karte hain ,aapko malum
hai na office mein kitna kaam hai and.....
VISHESH -haan dadaji ,aur maine kucch guests ko bhi bulaya haiaaj raat ki
shift mein.
adi,kamini aur dadaji vishesh ko dekhte hue ek saath =kise
vishesh-yahi kuch maurya high ke students hai jo call centre ke upar project report bana rahe hai
adi=oh c'mmon bhaiya ab vo bacche aayenge india calling mein nt happening at all!
kamini=darling tumhe mujhe batana chahiye tha
vishesh=are aap sab itna over react kyun kar rahe hain sirf dus bees students hi to aa rahe hai
chandni is getting ready 4 office
bg=chandni puttar vo tu doodh vale ka bill bhar dena
c=bhar dungi bg!accha bg aap jab mumbai aai hai tab se aap sirf hisaab-kitaab hi kar rahi hai!kahi ghumne nahi gayi
bg=lo kar lo gal tu kabhi lekar hi nahi gayi
c=to thike kal chalte hai juhu beech
bg=aaaho ji
and then both ghumaofy their parandis in the air
there in maurya canteen tia is talking to her angels
tia=angels tia can't tell u ki tia kitni worried hai!ek to tia ko headache ho raha hai aur upar se tia ke dark circles ho gaye hai kyunki kal tia thik se soi bhi nahi
meher=to tum inhe jaldi se thik kar lo tia kyunki aaj to hume call centre mein jana hai
pri=haan tia aaj to hume jaana hai bahut mazaa aayega
tia=gosh tia can't understand ki tum dono us tacky se call centre mein jaane ke liye itna desperate kyun ho rahe ho!call centre ka naam hi itna non-happening hai aur vaise bhi pri vahan tumhe khane ke liye kuch nahi milega
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