"my first fanfic"continued by me(part 17) - Page 3

👏 ...its really damn intrestin shrishti.....kp up d rockin wk

oh my god!!!! i m really speechless.dear u r doing an awesum work.it's fantastic.I hav fallen in luv wid it.way to go sweet heart.👏

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                    PART-4
smita comes and says=oh noooooooooooo
just then ashi,uv,tia and ranveer also reach there
amy=are kya huya smita
smita=adi tumne apne haath dhoye the
adi=kya!
smita=haan haan vo adhesive use karne ke baad kya tumne apne haath dhoye the
adi=nahi to
smita=tab to gadbad ho gayi
chandni=kya gadbad ho gayi
smita=meri watch tut gayi thi to adi ne adhesive se use fix kar di thi aur jo adhesive adi ke haathon par lagi huyi hai uska glue bahut pucca hai matlab
amy=tumhara matlab in dono ke i mean adi-chandni ke haath ab chipak gaye hai
smita=haan
chandni(shockingly and angrily)=kya
adi(happily)=kya!!!!
(then trying to show that he is shocked and unhappy)=kya
chandni=main aise pure din nahi reh sakti
she tries to let off her hand from his hand but her attempt fails!
adi=chandni honi ko to bhagwan bhi nahi tal sakta to tum kya chiz ho
and chandni stares at him angrily but adi gives a naughty smile!
smita=actually chandni tum naraaz mat hona par shayad ek din se zyaada bhi lag sakta hai par dun worry main kuch sochti hun!
adi is like jumping in his heart as if his dream has come true!
the break time is over....
amy=adi-chandni jab tak smita kisi conclusion tak nahi pahuchti tab tak tum dono adjust karna hoga !ab adi chandni tum dono alag kaam to nahi kar sakte aur chandni to ab adi ke cabin mein call to attend kar nahi sakti to adi tumhe chandni ki desk par kaam karna hoga
is it ok with u!
adi=perfectly alright
adi-chandni move towards chandni's desk and the rest alsoget back to their work!
ashi,uv,tia and ranveer are in a separate room with their maurya mates and preparing their report!Just then uv-ashi sees something from the open window of their room!they see that adi is just lost in chandni and chandni who is trying to ignore him is also getting influenced!
ashi=vo dekho love birds of india calling inko dekhkar aisa lag raha hai ki ye adhesive-gadbad se bahut khush hai!but they look cute with each other!
uv=ya just like we do!rite!
ashi=wrong!report banao bahut kaam pada hai!
she gives a subtle but deliberate smile and gets busy in work!
uv(in mind)=kaash wacko tum samajh pati ki ye pshyco tum se kitna pyar karta hai
then after sumtime there is the second break and every1-kabir,smita,amy,adi,chandni,uv,ashi,tia and ranveer r sitting in the canteen and are trying to find a solution 4 the problem!
amy=are smita ye jo tumhari watch fix ki thi ye to fir vaise hi ho gayi
smita=haan !ise shayad market se repair karana hoga
amy's mind clicks she says
amy=smita vo adhesive dikhana
smita=ye lo
amy just reads the indtructions,warnings and all written on the tube of adhesive and smiles and sees her watch
amy=adi tum dono ki is problem ko huye 6 ghante ho gaye na!
adi=haan
amy=pucca
adi=haan
amy=kamaal ki baat hai is adhesive ki tube par to likha hai kiiiiiii
chandni=ki kya
amy=ki iska asar sirf 4 ghante ka hai!
adi nervously smiles and says=are is adhesive ka to asar chut raha hai are chut gaya lo chandni tumhara aur mera haath free ho gaya!mera cell baj raha main abhi aata hun ok bye guyz!

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srishti ur story has everything. it has comedy,luv,drama i mean its mindblowing. u r doing a gr8 job. HATS OFF 2 u.👏

ya seriously.......awsum yaar 👏

kp it up 👏 👏

thx every1 😊 i will write the next part veryyyyyy soon! 😊

                       PART-5
students r back in maurya high!tia is in her room and talking to pri!
Tia=tia can't tell u babes that how she was laughing at that time!adi's face was worth to watch!
pri=i know tia !jab se tumne ye baat batai hai meri bhi
hasi ruk nahi rahi hai!chandni is sooo lucky ki use aisa boyfriend mila hai!
tia=!!!!!!boyfriend!!!!!angel abhi tak to adi ne chandni ko thik se propose bhi nahi kiya hoga!
pri=par kyun!
tia=vo actually.......oh shuks
pri=kya huya
tia=pri tia ko practice ke liye jana hai shed mein oh i mean hall mein tia baar baar bhul jati hai ki remix is no longer a secret! ok bye angel!
pri=bye
tia reaches the hall where ashi,uv,ranveer were already waiting for her!ashi is angry coz tia is late
ashi=timblet apne timblet makeup ke liye tumhe yahi time milta hai kya!hum sab tumhara kitni der se wait kar rahe hai
tia=ok ok tia is sorry!
uv=its ok tia wacko to aisi hi hai!
ashi=haan physco main aisi hi hun!do u have any problem!
uv=oh ya!
ranveer=accha accha guyz bahut ho gaya jhagra practice karni hai ya nahi!accha chalo tia aap hi bataiye aaj hum kaunsa gana practice kare!
tia=tia thinks
tumhare hain hum
ranveer=par yahi gana kyun!
tia=vo isliye kyunki aaj jo humne love ka example dekha uske baad to tia is sure ki hum sab ko yahi song practice!what say!
ashi=4 the first time i have to agree with u timbo!
uv=then what r we waiting 4 guys lets practice
and then they sing this beautiful song with full enthusiasm!
there in khanna house
adi is in his room,sitting on bed,changing channels of the television!he comes across a channel where a program is being showed!the show is love guru
just then grandpa comes in his room and asks him what is he watching so carefully
gp=adi beta itna dhyaan lagakar kya dekh raha hai
adi=ek show aa raha hai.....love guru....
gp=are jab tera love guru tere saamne hai to tujhe aise faltu program dekhne ki kya zaroorat hai!
adi=rehne do haan grandpa!yaad hai jab hum picnic mein gaye the !aur chandni aur main jungle mein kismat se kho gaye the!hume vahann khoye aadha din bhi nahi huya tha ki puri ki puri india calling ki paltan hume dhundne jungle mein aaa dhamki thi!maine socha tha akele hum dono mein kuch pyar bhari baatein hongi,hum dono kuch kareeb aayenge lekin nahi in sab ko bhi tabhi aana tha dhundne ke liye!do teen din nahi ruk sakte the!aur phir vishesh bhaiya unhone bhi picnic ke beech mein se sabko bula liya kisi stupid se contract ki vajah se!
grandpa begins to laugh and adi is angry
adi=main yaaha problem mein hun aur aapko mazaak sujh raha hai!
gp=accha accha tera gussa jayaz hai par is baar koi gadbad nahi hogi!
adi=is baar matlab
gp=matlab ye maine vishesh se kehkar india calling mein ek party rakhvai hai
adi=party!
gp=haan party jismein sabhi employees aur saath mein maurya ke students bhi invited hai!ab isi party mein tu chandni ke kareeb bhi chale jana!
adi=gp u r gr8!thank u sooooo much!par agar chandni nahi aai to
gp=agar vo tujh se pyar karti hai to pucca aayegi
adi=ye baat to aapne pehle picnic ke time bhi kahi thi
gp=kaise na kaise aai thi vo na tab
adi=vo to hai
gp=to bas ab bhi vo aayegi!
and a sparkle comes in adi's eyes!

👏 ....i jus luv ur fusion of 2 of my fav shows 👏 👏 👏 damn
intrestin

                        PART-6
vishesh is making an announcement in the hub where all employees and maurya students r there!
V=u all r cordially invited for the party tomorrow!aap sab ko vahaan aana hai chahe vo india calling ke employees ho ya fir maurya ke students!party kal 9 pm ki hai!now u all can get back to work
every1 out there get back to work!adi is in his cabin!he calls amy to his cabin!
amy comes and says....
amy=hey adi kya chal raha hai!
adi=hi amy baitho!
amy=kaho kis liye bulaya mujhe!
adi=vo vo vo hmmmmmmm mmmmh
amy=kya vo hmmmm mmmmmmh
adi=actually......
amy=samajh gayi samajh gayi chandni ke baare mein baat hai na
adi=nahi haan!amy can do me a favour
amy=sochna padega accha bolo
adi=yaar tum friend ho na to plz plz tumhe kal ki party mein chandni ko lana hoga!
amy=aur is kaam ko karne ke liye mujhe kya milega
adi=jo tum kaho1
amy=just kidding yaar tumhara kaam ho jayega
adi=done
amy=done dana done
then its break time chandni is sitting with amy in the canteen.......amy wants to talk to her about the party so to begin the talk she asks
amy=are chandni aaj tu late kyun ho gayi thi
c=vo aaj beeji ko ghumane ke liye juhu beach gayi thi na isliye late ho gayi
amy=accha tu kal ki party mein aa rahi hai na
c=kaunsi party
amy=are vahi party jis ke liye vishesh aaj annoucement kar raha tha
c=dekhungi
amy=kya matlab dekhungi
c=matlab bg se puchna hoga!
amy=tu aa rahi hai bas aur main kuch nahi sunna chahti
and chandni begins to think about it!

ps=sorry for the short part....was in damn hurry!