"my first fanfic"continued by me(part 17) - Page 4

I must say srishti ur too gud.it fantablous.Awesum yar.no soory vorry yaar.Every part is superb.👏

superkkkkkkk, one up than better. 😉

damn good! 😊 👏

                      PART-7
maurya high....
tia=pri babes tum party ke liye kya pehen ke jaogi
pri=tia maine to ye dress select ki hai
tia=wow tumhari dress to bilkul perfect hai angel
par tia ke to kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki vo kya pehne
pri=tia i think u shud wear this one
tia=no babes ye dress to tia ne kal hi pehna tha
pri=to fir ye
tia=par ye dress to tia ne parson hi pehna tha
pri=fir ye tia tum pe bahut suit karega
tia=par.......
just then ashi comes and says......
A=he timblet what's up
tia=u red head!tia ko tumse is waqt koi baat nahi karni!
A=kyun timbo is waqt kya tumne apne muh mein laddoo daba rakha hai!
tia=ewwwwwwww tia ko laddoo bilkul pasand nahi hai!
A=to fir soil pasand hai kya!
tia=how tacky soil se to se to uhhhhhhhhh..................tumhari problem kya hai ashi kyun tum tia ko tang kar rahi ho
A=ok ok for bhaggoo's sake chillax!bolo tum aaj itni irritated kyun dikh rahi ho make up khatam ho gaya kya
tia=tia ki problem ye hai ki tia ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki vo ic party mein kya pehen ke jaye
A=ye pehen lo tum par suit karega
pri=no ye nahi accha lagega
tia=wait a minute red head u r genius
A=well vo to main hu
tia=it will look perfect on tia!
pri=jaisa tumhe accha lage tia1
tia=wow ab tia tia gorgeous lagegi is dress mein!yessssss!
khanna house.......
grandpa comes to adi's room and is shocked to see the state ok the room
gp=oh adi ye kamre ko kya dhobhi ghat bana rakha hai!yahan vahan kapde faike huye hai!
adi=gp mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki main party ke liye kya pehnu!
gp=beta mere khayal se to tujhe party ke liye kapde pehenke jane chahiye!
adi=bad joke gp!
gp=accha accha ye pehen le
adi=ye pucca!
gp=haan
adi=ise dekhakar chandni impress hogi
gp=chandni kapde dekhkar impress nahi hone vaaliuse tujhe apne andaz se impress karna hai!teri bhasha mein style se impress karna hai!
adi=aap to bilkul amy jaise baat kar rahe ho!
vo din mein dus baar bolti hai "style hai to smile hai"
gp=haan puttar amy dimag ki kacchi hai par is baat par to vo bhi thik hai!style hai to tabhi smile hai!
adi=to thike gp maine bhi agar chandni ko apne style ke peeche deewana na kar diya na to mera naam bhi aditya khanna nahi!afterall adi rox!
gp=afterall grandson kiska hai!
and they both laugh!

NICE PART SRISTI CONTINUE SOON 👏

an advice shrishti post this on the remix forum as well........there they have a lot of activity and so u'll get more response.vaise nice imagination and creativity.

ok i will surily post this fic thre by tomorrow 😊

oh wow your fic is really great... even the remix forum is interested... i guess Shristi you should definately take up literature (arts) in college and you will become a great journalist... one day when i'll read the newspaper and tell my son look this is my friend whos writing the articles in this leading newspaper... 👏

Originally posted by: leogal

oh wow your fic is really great... even the remix forum is interested... i guess Shristi you should definately take up literature (arts) in college and you will become a great journalist... one day when i'll read the newspaper and tell my son look this is my friend whos writing the articles in this leading newspaper... 👏

thx for the compliment dhvani😳

Edited by srishti bhutani - 17 years ago

ya dhwani is rite........its realli damn gud shrishti 👏 ......seriously ur fic is so entertainin dat i don miss d org characters yaar

once again hats off 👏

                      PART-8
Amy comes to chandni's place and knocks at the door!
chandni opens the door and amy says.....
amy=chandni tu abhi tak tayyar nahi huyi !party mein jana hai ya nahi
chandni=amy mera mann nahi hai!tum chali jao!
amy=c'mmon chandni tujhe Chalna hi hoga!agar nahi gayi to pata hai adi i mean to say vishesh ko kitna bura lagega!usne kitne pyar se sab ko invite kiya hai!aur tu to unki fav. employee hai!tujhpe kitna trust karte hai vo!tu hi aisa karegi to
chandni=dekh amy main na jakar kisi ka trust nahi tod rahi 100 employees mein se agar 1 employee nahi gaya to kisi ko koi farak nnahi padega
amy=par adi i mean mujhe to padega!chal yaar
just then bg comes and says
bg=are ye kya party sharty ki baat ho rahi hai
amy=bg dekhiye na aajindia calling mein party hai aur vishesh sir ne sabko bulaya hai!aur ye chandni hai ki chal hi nahi rahi apni zidd par adddi huyi hai
bg=puttar tere vishesh sir ne sab ko bulaya hai tu nahi gayi to unhe bura lagega
chandni=par bg....
amy=chal ab to bg bhi razi ho gayi ab to chal
chandni=thike main change karke aati hun
amy=ek minute aaj main tujhe dress select karke deti hun
bg=accha chandni main mandir ja rahi hu tu fir chali jana
amy-chandni=bye bg
bg=bye bye
then from the almirah amy chooses a beautiful black churidar
amy=ye pehen le tujhpar bahut suit karega
chandni=ye pucca
amy=haan pucca chal ab ja jaldi
chandni goes to the wash room to change then after a few minutes she comes out
chandni=kaisi lag rahi hu main
amy =bahut acchi bas ek kami hai
chandni=kya
amy=zara ghum
chandni turns and amy opens her parandi
amy=aaj ke din to kam se kam ye parandi khol de thuj par khule baal bahut suit karte hai!chal
and both leave from there
in ic party is going on all the maurya students have already reached and even all employees have reached xcept chandni and amy!
ashi is coming from one side and uv is coming from the other side and both collide
ashi=physco tum dekhke nahi chal sakte kya
uv is just stunned to see ashi ashi is luking reeli pretty
ashi=ab kuch bolo bhi are kuch bol hi nahi rahe
     phsyco physco physcooooo
she shakes him and uv gets back in reality
ashi=duh uh kis dreamworld mein khoye huye ho physco
uv=kisi dreamworld mein nahi btw wacko aaj bahut acchi lag rahi ho
ashi janbhujkar says......
ashi=mujhe timbo bula rahi hai i have to go
uv=par maine to tia ki aawaz nahi suni
ashi=vo isliye kyunki tumhare kaan kharab hai now bye
ashi leaves and uv smiles to himself
uv=i know ashi u also luv me but confess nahi karti par ek na ek din zaroor karogi!
adi is anxiously waiting 4 chandni and ashi observes this and she comes to him
ashi=hey hi adi
adi=hi ashi
ashi=chandni ka intezaar kar rahe ho
adi=main uska wait kyun karunga
ashi=duh uh now don't behave as if sab ko kuch pata nahi hai bolo usi ka wait kar rahe ho na
adi=haan!par vo abhi tak aayi nahi
ashi=dun worry aa jayegi!
just then adi's cell rings and he xcuses ashi for a minute after a few seconds adi cuts the phone
ashi=kya huya adi
adi=jis band ko is party mein play karne ko bulaya tha vo nahi aa payegi
ashi=thats nt a problem!remix!
adi=remix!!
ashi= i mean ranveer,uv,tia aur mera ek band hai jiska naam hai remix!hum play kar sakte hai
adi=par.....
ashi=dun worry ye hamara first experience nahi hai hum pehle bhi discos,parties aur pubs mein play kar chuke hai
adi=wow that's gr8 musical instruments tumhe yaahan se provide ho jayange
ashi=but one condition is there
Adi=kya?????
ps=whats the condition to find the answer keep urselves updated with this fusion fic