Posted: 17 years ago

He guyz....i've written a number of poems in my ff "Humko Deewana Kar Gaye"...Hope u like this poem which I wrote when I moved away to a new house...I changed school...I gave this poem to the one who I "loved" b4 moving...do tell me how u like it!

 

A Trip Down Memory Lane

I take another trip down memory lane,

I do it everyday, again and again.

My heart grieves thinking about the past

How long will these disturbing memories last?

This question is gradually killing me from inside

And puts me through pain I can no longer hide.

Have I been wasting my time all these years?

Faking a smile and choking back my tears?

As I make my way down memory lane,

Sorrowful thoughts drive me insane.

Nothing but pain lies in my past,

These wounds will take time, they won't heal fast.

I am still waiting, my emotions are still,

Hoping these memories aren't overwhelming enough to kill.

I don't know what is tomorrow, I live in yesterday

Not making any effort to store my thoughts away.

I constantly ponder, What went wrong?

Why our relationship was so short, and my life so long?

I happened so quickly, why did it have to die?

God didn't even give me a chance to say goodbye.

It seems even today we are linked by a chain

Thus everyday, I take a trip down memory lane.

 

Posted: 17 years ago

omg..omg...dats so touchin...i duno wa 2 say...i m totali speechless...mormali i m classed as big mouth lol. 😆 .alwyz av sumfin 2 say ba ur poem as left anum wiv no words. 😕 ..i m reli sori 4 wa hapened 2 ya....i m sure whr eva dat lad is he will alwyz memba ya n every word in ur poem has shown ur feelinz 2 him...we jus gota accept life n mova along..i knw itz hard ba u av 1 fing dat no1 can take 4rm ya n dats his memories...awww...blesh...luv is so innocent n sweet n i agree 2 da fact dat true luv onli hapnez once aww....hope ya find sum1 dat givz ya da luv hapiness ya deserve...derz alwyz sum1 out der 4 every1...

Edited by syreen_786 - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
OMG!!!!! i love it!!!!!! this poem really made me feel sad 😭 😭
i hope ur ok hun.....ive been in the same situation...im in UK and my bf is in pakistan but m going pakistan in 2 days and m gonna see him!!! 😃
dont worry hun...as they say everything happens for the best...love ya...im always here if u need 2 talk 2 me!!! 🤗
Hinna xxxxxxxxx
Posted: 17 years ago
wow..it's fantastic......rly rly heart-touching....nice one and thxx 4 sharin...
Posted: 17 years ago
that was great
👏
Thanx 4 sharing
Heart touchingEdited by punjabi love - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
such a nice poem really i loved it 👏
Posted: 17 years ago
thats nice really but very sad 😭
Posted: 17 years ago

Gawd!!! That was just awesome! 👏

Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by syreen_786


omg..omg...dats so touchin...i duno wa 2 say...i m totali speechless...mormali i m classed as big mouth lol. 😆 .alwyz av sumfin 2 say ba ur poem as left anum wiv no words. 😕 ..i m reli sori 4 wa hapened 2 ya....i m sure whr eva dat lad is he will alwyz memba ya n every word in ur poem has shown ur feelinz 2 him...we jus gota accept life n mova along..i knw itz hard ba u av 1 fing dat no1 can take 4rm ya n dats his memories...awww...blesh...luv is so innocent n sweet n i agree 2 da fact dat true luv onli hapnez once aww....hope ya find sum1 dat givz ya da luv hapiness ya deserve...derz alwyz sum1 out der 4 every1...

 

thanx alot...u have REALLLY cheered me up!..hope whtever u said iz rite and cumz tru!😊

Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you allllll for appreciating my poem and caring abt my feelings!

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