Posted: 18 years ago

 

  Angad uske garden main bethe kuch soch raha tha or piche se kise ne aawaz di HI ANGAD

   Angad: Hey JOsh what a surprise!

    Josh: hey Angad bus main tumhe surprise dena chahta tha

  Angad: kitne salo baad tu America se wapas aaya

  JOsh: i know 7 years ke baad

 Angad: to bata kya chal raha hain

Josh: bus kuch bhi nahi

 phir aliyah Angad or JOsh ko baatein karke dekh leti hain or soch main padti hain ki brother ke pass kon hain use to maine kabhi bhi nahi dekha but i think he is cute ❤️so let me go and find out abt him

  Aliyah: hey brother kya chal raha hain

  Angad: hey aliyah meet my friend Josh jo abhi hi America se aaya hain

   Aliyah: hi JOsh nice to meet u

   JOsh: same here

   phir josh or aliyah ek dusre ko dekh te hi rahe te hain jaise do lovers ek dusre ko dekh te rahe te hain😉

   Angad: achha to andar chale JOsh sab ko mil to lo

   JOsh : han chalo

   phir JOsh or Angad andar chale jate hain or aaliyah JOsh ke bare main hi soch ti rahe ti hain

   Aliyah: herself is JOsh ko to main paaker hi rahoongi👏

   phir wo bhi ander chali jaati hain Angad or Josh sabko milte hain phir naina aunty bhi Josh ko milke khush ho jaati hain phir anitah bhi JOsh se milte hain or wo to Josh ko dekh ker bilkul hosh kho beth ti hain lakin JOsh ke face per to koi reaction nahi aata use dekh kar🥱 kyunki use t aaliyah hi pasand aa gayi hain❤️

  Anitah: hi JOsh

  JOsh: hi

  Anitah: tum bahot handsome ho😉

  JOsh: thanks😊

  phir aaliyah ye sunkar thodesi confused ho jati hain 😕

  Aliyah: wo to hain hi😃

   phir anitah aliyah ki taraf gusse se dekh ti hain

   to ab aliyah or Anitah do no JOsh ko pasnad karne lage hain to ab aage kya hoga if u wann know guya then let me know to main continue story kar saku aghar tumhe pasand na aaye to bhi mujhe bata dena ok

 

 

  

Posted: 18 years ago
👏👏👏 Please continue
Posted: 18 years ago

😊😉ok here

  Naina: ok JOsh to tum fresh ho jao phir sab log saath main khana kahyenge

  JOsh: ok aunty

Naina: teddy JOsh ko uska kamra dekha do

 Teddy: ok madam

 Anitah: main JOsh ko uska kamra dekha du kyunki main bhi upper hi ja rahi hun apne kamre main

 Aliyah: are tumhe dekhane ki kya jaroorat hain teddy use dekha dega kyun aunty?

 Naina: aliyah sahi kahe rahe hain

 phir anitah aliyah ke samne dekh ti hain😡

 Josh : ok aunty to main fresh hoke aata hun

 Angad: ok mom to main bhi mere kamre main jake aata hun

 Anitah: Naina aunty ye JOsh yahan per kab tak rahe ne wala hain

 Naina: i dont know tum hi puch lena

 Aliyah: kyun anitah tumhe pasand nahi aaya josh yahan per hain to😉

 Anitah: nahi muje to bahot hi acha laga maine to kahe ne hi wali thi ki Josh jab tak India main hain tab tak yahan per hi rahe

Aliyah: kyun tumhe bahot pasnad ane laga hain

 Anitah: are tum ye kaise batein kar rahi ho

 phir aliyah musku rati hain😛

Naina: are tum dono ko kya ho gaya hain jo JOsh Josh kiye ja rahe ho

 Aliyah : kuch bhi to nahi aunty

 phir anitah or aliyah waha se jaldi se chale jate hain

 jab aliyah uske kamre main ja rahi hoti hain tab wo ruk jati hain or soch ti hain ke ye gane ki aawaz kaha se aari hain kon garaha hoga

aliyah: herself ,gane ki aawaz to is kamre main se aa ahi hain kamra to khula hain to let me go in and chek it out

 phir aliyah kamre ke andar jati hain to dekh ti hain ti bathroom main se gane ki aawaz aa rahi hain phir wo musku trati hain or samaj jati hain ki ye JOsh ki aawaz hain

  Aliyah:herself,  aawaz to baho hi achi hain

  phir wo kamre ke bahar nikal jati hain

  Angad: are aliyah kya hua tum musku ra kyun rahi ho

 aliyah angad ko dekh kar gabhra jati hain

 aliyah: are kuch nahi brother

  Angad: oh ok to tum Josh ke room main gaye thi or uska ye gana sun rahi thi 😊

  Aliyah: are brother tum ko kaise malum

 Angad: bus wo to tumhe room ke bahar dekha to samaj gaya

 Aliyah: to bhaiya kya Josh bathroom singer hain ( makin fun of him)

  Angad: wo to malum nahi lakin ha wo rock star jaroor hain usne bahot hi show kiye hain america main

 Aliyah: what bhaiya😊 JOsh and rock star

  aliyah ye sunke bahot hi khush ho jati hain

  Angad: han

           phir ye dono ki baatein anitah sun lati hain or wo bhi bahot hi khush ho jati hain😊

   utne main hi JOsh apne kamre main se bahar aata hain

Josh: hi guys

 Angad and Aliyah : hi Josh

phi anita bhi josh ko dekh kar waha pahonch jati hain

 i will continue 2morrow ok guys let me know if u like it

 

 

Posted: 18 years ago
wow plzzz continue good job👍🏼
Posted: 18 years ago
kewl story. continue fast. 
Posted: 18 years ago

👏 continue

   Anitah: hi angad

   JOsh: hi

   JOsh: to sab khana khane ke liye chale ?mujhe to bahot bhukh lagi hain

   phir sab khana khate samay Josh se bahot sare sawal karte hain or phir anitah bhi sawal karti hain

 Anitah: to josh tum mujhe ek baat bataoge sachhi

 JOsh: han kaho kya baat hain

  Anitah: do u have gf?

  Josh jwab de us se pahele hi aliyah bich main aajati hain or kahe ti hain

  Aliyah: kyun? aghar Josh ki gf na hoto tumhe uski gf banneka irada hain kya?😉😆😛

  Anitah: aliyah ye sawal maine tumhe nahi kiya im asking to JOsh so plz😡

  phir aliyah 😆

  JOsh: plzz dont fight girls i dont have any gf 👏lakin anitah tumne mujhe ye sawal kyun kiya?😕

  anitah: ummm nahi sirf aise hi kyunki america main to mostly sab ladko ke pass gf hoti hain 😉to mujhe laga ki tumhare pass bhi hoge

   phir ye janke ki Josh ke pass gf nahi hain to wo bahot hi khush ho jati hain or aliyah bhi

  Naina: ok anitah ab baatein kam karo or JOsh ko khana khane do

  Angad: josh to kal ka tumhara kya plan hain ?

 JOsh: kuch bhi nahi i m free

  Angad: to hum log kuch plan kar sakte hain i mean kahi bahar jana like picnic or something

  JOsh: tab to bahot hi maja ayega

 Angad: to sab log taiyar hain kal picnic ke liye😃

  everyone says : ya😃

 

  phir khana khake sab log baatein karte hain or phir sone ke liye chale jaate hain

   phir aliyah bhi apne kamre main jake sote sote JOsh hi ke bare main soch ti rahe ti hain

  Aliyah: herself , Josh muje tumhe dekh kar paheli hi najar main tumse pyaar ho gaya malum nahi aisa to tum main kya hain magar dil na jane tumhare hi bare main soch tahain jab tum mere pass nahi hote to muje kuch bhi achha nahi lagat or sirf tumhare hi bare main soch ti hun😉 ,hope ki jaisa main tumhare bare main feel kar rahi hun aisa tum bhi feel kar rahe hoge jab sahi time aajaye ga tab main tumhe apne dil ki baat bata dungi❤️

   phir aliyah yahi khayalo main kho jati hain or JOsh bhi apne kamre main ab aliyah ke bare main soch ta hain

  Josh: himself, aliyahn  tum wo pahe li hi ladki hon jo tumhe dekh kar dil main kuch hua hain ab to sirf tum hi tum ho meri dhadkan main 😊

  phir josh apne kamre ki light off kardeta hain or phir so jata hain

  now its a morning and picnic day

   sab log taiyar hoke break fast ke liye aajate hain lakin JOsh abhi tak niche nahi aaya

 Naina: are abhi tak Josh kyun nahi aaya bf ke liye?

  Angad: mama sayad wo so raha hoga thak gaya hoga

  Naina: are lakin hame picnic pe jana hain to use plz koi jagao barna hame deri ho jaye gi picnic ke liye use kahe na ke wo aake phir so jaye

Anitah: han aunty thik kahe ti hain 😊

 Aliyah: aunty kya main use jagau ?

  Naina: han plz

  phir anitah uske taraf gusse se dekh ti hain😡

 phir aliyah josh ke kamre main jati hain or Josh ko sleepy karte hue dekh ti hain or Josh ke hi tarf bahot pyaar se dekh ti rahe ti hain 😊 

  guys i will continue my story 2 morrow if u like it otherwise just.......

 

 

 

 

  

 

  

Posted: 18 years ago
i love it it is awsome continue soon!
Posted: 18 years ago

😡continue...... and ne one can continue my story if u want to😊

     aliyah JOsh ke keamre main..........

      phir achanak JOsh nind main se jagjata hain or dekh ta hain to aliyah uske bistear ke pass thi

  JOsh: are aliyah tum yahan tum kab aaye

  Aliyah: ohhh wowwo main to tumhe jagane ke liye aaye thi naina aunty ne kahato kyunki hame picnic ke liye jana hain na ( wo bahot sweet bolti hain)😊

   JOsh: ohhhh shoot main to bhool hi gaya ki aaj hame picnic ke liye jana hain😭

   Aliyah: ok to tum fresh hoke niche aajo 😊

JOsh: ok and bye the way thanks ki tum muje jagane ke liye aaye❤️ orphir wo aliyah ki taraf cute se smile deta hain or aliyah bhi😉

   phir josh fresh hoke niche aajata hain or break fast karke sab picnic jane ke liye tayar ho jate hain

  Anitah: JOsh aaj to tum bahot hi handsome lagrahe ho is dress main😉

   phir aliyah musku rake kaheti hain ki to tumhara matlab hain ki wo pahele cute nahi lagata tha👏 phir aliyah waha se bahar chali jati hain or anitah bhi uske piche jati hain🤢 or kahe ti hain ki..

  Anitah: aliyah jab main Josh se baat karti hun to hamesha tum bich main kyun aa jati ho kahi aisa to nahi ki u like JOsh😕 ( uske majak karte hua)

   Aliyah: sayad aisa hi kuch 😃

   Anitah: kya matlab?

   Aliyah: oh anitah darling tum itni bhi bewakuf nahi ho ki meri baat ko nahi samaj sakti😆

   Anitah: hummm to tumhe bhi JOsh utna hi pasand hain jitna muje 😃

        tab to bahot maja aye ga is khel ka

  Aliyah: what tum ise khel samjati ho 😡 kisi ko pyaar karna koi khel nahi hain samji tum

  Anitah: maine kab kaha ki main pyaar ko khel kahe rahi hoon main to kahe ti hun ki ab to bahot jame gi tumhare or mere bich main ab dekh te hain ki kon JOsh ko apna bana ne ke liye safal ho ta hain😈

  Aliyah: jiska sachha pyaar hoga wo hi hoga ❤️ or tum kya jano ki pyaar kya hota hain bas tum to sirf ladko ki surat dekh kar hi pyaar kar sakti ho

   Anitah:😡

   jab wo dono baatein kar rahe heian to angad utne main aa jata hain

  Angad: hey girls what r u doing here? cmon picnic ke liye jana hain to sab saman car main rakh lo

  Aliyah: han brother aaye😕

 phir anitah aliyah ke upper gussa hoke vahase chali jati hain

   phir sab log picnic ke liye nikal padte hain👏

   hey guys sorry ke main ye story yahan par chod rahi hun lakin ab main kal continue karunge ok let me know if u like it or if this part is not good then let me know i will be careful next time ok

   continue i think 2 morrow😊

 

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