Fan Fic: Two Friends

Posted: 18 years ago

Hi all,

as every one is writing in their own style , even i want to do some experiment, let me know if u guys like it.

Angad aur Kripa ke families ache friends hey

misthi angad ki behan hey

karthik kripa ka bayi hey

prithvi en charo ka best friend hey

prithvi kripa se bahuth pyar kartha hey

Prithvi(call kripa): hi Kripa

kripa : Hi prithvi, whats up yaar

prithvi: kripa kya tum ajj sham ko free ho kya

kripa: bholgaya kya , ajj sham ko ham football khel ne vale hey na

prithvi : oh ya , tik hey to mein tum se sham mein miltha hu

sham ko football ho ne ka badh karthik, misthi, angad, kripa, prithvi coffe shop jate hey (vunki adath hey)

kripa : ha prithvi mein tho puchna bholgayi tum dupher ko phoen kiye te kya bath hey

prithvi : kuch nahin yu hi phone kiya tha

angad : hey guys kal karthik ke ghar main ek party hey and u guys need to come

karthik: kya bath hey angad kis bath ki party hey, aur wo bhi mere ghar main aur mujhe patha nahin 

angad : karthik tume yaad nahin ki kal  kya hey

karthik: kya kal kuch kas din hey kya

kripa : karthik tume tho kuch bath yaad hi nahin rahthi har waqt padayi nahin tho papa ka business main help karna bus yahi tumari zindaghi

karthik: kripa just shut up yaar, tume patha hey na mere bhare main phir se lecture math de yaar. sidha bathana kya bath hey

prithvi : arey karthik kal kripa ka birthday hey, kya yaar tujhe kudh ki birthday yaad nahin rahthi, dusro ko chod atleast tere behan ka tho birthday yaad rakna

karthik: oh ya kal kripa ka birthday hey na, I am sorry kripa mein tho bul hi gaya

kripa : its ok baya, kal mera gift dhena tho math bul na

karthik: ok baba, abb chele kya

to bo conti.........

plz let me know whether u like it   

 

 

 

 

Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful fan-fic and keep it up!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Posted: 18 years ago

Part 2

last part ended with

karthik : ok baba , abb chele kya

now......

mid night 12 karthik wakes up kripa

karthik: Wish U Many Many Happy Returns of the day meri pyari behana

and he gives her a gift.

Kripa: Thanks baya, iska matlab apko mera janam dhin yaad hey app bule nahin

Karthik : main apni behan ka janam dhin kaise bul sakth hu aur mujhe dekthi rahoghi ya gift be koleghi

kripa opens the gift , and gets surprised seeing it , the gift is the keys of the brand new and newly released sports car about which she asked karthik a week ago .

kripa hugs karthik aur vuske ghal pe ek kiss dethi hey

vuska cell bajtha hey aur she picks it up it is from prithvi

prithvi : Many Happy returns of the day birthday baby

kripa : thanks prithvi

prithvi : can u open the door

kripa : kya !

prithvi : open the door, dharvaza kolo abhi samaje main aya nahin tho koi aur basha main bholu kya

kripa : ek minute kol thi hu

she opens the door and gets double surprised by seeing prithvi, angad, misthi, aliya and josh.

aliya is the cousin of angad and josh is the brother of prithvi

kripa ( surprised): app sub log yaha kaise

angad ( with a nauty face ): kya hey na, hamne suna ki edher ek bhoothni ane valli hey tho hamne soch ki kyu na ham sub vuse welcome kare, lekin shayad vo bhootni ham se pehle hi agayi hey.

kripa (all confused): kya bhootni, kya keh rahey ho

angad( again with a naugty look) : abhi samje main nahin aya kya bhoothni ji aliyas kripa ji, ha kaise samaj main ayega abhi to app payidha huve aur upper se app ko dimakh bhi chahiye soch ne keliye jo app ke pass nahin hey.( and he runs)

kripa ( wants to catch angad ) : angad ruko varna acha nahin raheyga angad ruko, badmash , stupid, idiot, i will kill u wait, wait i will kill u .

atlast kripa catches angad and beats him saying i will kill u stupid idiot 

after a while every one wishes her and kripa cuts the cake got by them and they enjoy

kripa : aliya tum kabh ayi ho US se, mujhe to angad ne bathaya bhi nahin

aliya : main kal hi ayi thi aur maine hi kaha angad se , tume nahin bol ne ke liye, main tume surprise dhena chathi thi

kripa : thanks aliya

josh : kripa tum mujse bath nahin karoghi kya, zara hame se bhi bath kijiye

kripa : Josh vaisa koyi bath nahin, by the way tumhari business kaise chal rahi hey

Josh : sub kuch tik chal raha hey

they enjoy for a while and every body goes back, but prithvi comes back after every one went away and calls kripa

prithvi : kripa..

kripa : kya hey prithvi kya bath hey, kuch bul gaye kya

prithvi( he wants to tell that he loves her but hesitates ): oh .......... actually main tum sorry kehana chahtha tha

kripa(with a confused expression) : sorry kis bath ke liye prithvi

prithvi : oh maine tume birthday gift nahi laya na isliye

kripa : uff... prithvi tum har waqt mere dosth bane rahana voi bada gift hey now gud night mujhe nindh a rahi hey

prithvi ( gives a smile) : gud night, bye

kripa : bye

to be conti......

   

 

Edited by sweety223 - 18 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago
hey its too gd plz continue soon
Posted: 18 years ago
kewl awesome work. please continue soon. 
Posted: 18 years ago

part 3

recap:

Prithvi tries to tell kripa that he loves her, but can't

now....

next day

gaytri(kripa's mom): kripa janam dhin mubharak ho beta, chalo jaldhi se ready ho jao mandhir jayenge hum sub

kripa(still on bed): Oh maa plz todi dher aur so javunghi plz

G: kripa meri achi bachi vutona sab log tayar hey plz uthona

karthik enters the room

Karthik: maa app cheliye main kripa ko lekhar atha hu

G: tik hey par jaldi karna

karthik: kripa uthona

kripa sits on the bed still closing her eyes and putting her arm around karthik'seck

kripa: bhaya plz dus min aur

then she sleeps agian on karthik

karthik: aghar tum uthi tho ham dono mandhir se sidha bahar gumne jayenge aur ajj sar dhin no padyi no business , i will spend the whole day with u come on wake up my princess

kripa: trying wake up: app sach kah rahe hey ya phir se mujhe uthane keliye kaha rahe  hey

karthik: nahin kripa iam serious and i promise u

kripa wakes up

kripa: phir tik hey bhaya abbi dus min ready hojathi hu

karthik : tik hey phir main niche tumare liye wait karunga

kripa gets ready comes down waring a cream kapri with a black top

G: kya kripa mandhir ko yehi dress kay achi tarah koi traditional dress pehen sakthi na

kripa: plz maa ajj mera janam dhin hey mujhe meri marzi pehene dijiye na

karthik: abb chalo bhi na maa papa bahar wait kar rahey hey

they come out suryabhan is waiting for them in the car

S : happy birthday meri pyari guddiya

K: thanks papa, bhaya kya hum meri nayi gadi main ja sakte hey

Ka : sure kripa, papa main aur kripa iss gadi main athey hey aur app maa apki gadi main chele jayiye

they all go to mandhir and while coming back karthik and kripa goes for shopping and their parents go home

at shopping they meet their friends 

J: hey guys today iam going to give a party for u

A: kya bath hey josh , kahi tume girlfrnd to nahin milli na

J: GF aur main no way angad, mujhe ek bada business contract milla issliye aur prithvi ko modeling offer milla.

K: prithvi tumne mujhe bathaya kyu nahin

P: oh kripa actually kya hey ki

K: kya oh a bol rahey ho

J: actually bath ya hey ki prithvi ko hi patha nahin hey iss offer ke bhare main just 10 min back i told him

K: congrats prithiv

P: thanks kripa

and every one wishes him

to be conti....

 

 

 

Posted: 18 years ago

part 4

recap :

evevry one goes for shooping

now....

prithvi asks kripa to come with him to select a shirt for him , kripa goes with prithvi

p: kripa mujhe tumse kuch kehna hey

K: ha bolo prithvi

P: kripa oh main tumse pyar kartha hu

K:laughing loudly): prithvi iam sorry but mujhse ye hasi ruki nahin jarahi hey, prithvi pyaar main vishwas nahin karthi hu, mujhe nahin lagtha ki sacha pyaar hotha hey , jaha tak mujhe patha hey shadhi sirf ek compromise hey , shyaad tum mujhe shaadhi ke liye puchthe tho main shayad ha kahthi, but iam sorry prithvi

aur o vaha se chali jathi hey

p: kripa mujhe patha hey tume ek na ek dhin pyaar zarur hoga, i will wait for u kripa

kripa cell rings

kripa:hello

J: kripa kya tum ajj disco arahi ho na

k: ha avunghi

kripa goes home and finds that angad, misthi aur vunke parents bhi ghar aye hey

K: namste aunty , namaste uncle kasie hey app

naina & dilip:ham tik hey tum kaise ho beta

A: mom apko kya nahin lagtha ki  hey kripa thodi sa tired hey

K: ha angad main bath tak chuki hu i will freshup

kripa goes to her room and gets changed, she wares a jean skirt with a white top and a jean jacket leaves her down with a thread hangings to ears, she looks amazing

K: kya bath hey maa ajj koi kas dhin hey kya

G: ha beta karthik aur misthi ki shaadhi fix ho gayi hey

karthik and misthi's marriage is arranged not love

k: arey va congrats bhaya , congrats misthi

Ka: thnaks kripa

M(sharmateh huve): thanks

to be conti...     

Posted: 18 years ago
hey sweety...i read ur fan-fic..and its awesome...i love it....ur doing a great jobπŸ‘πŸΌ...plz continue soon!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Posted: 18 years ago
amazing work sweety. please continue soon. I loved it.
Posted: 18 years ago
hey sis it was sweet plzz don't stop!!

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