FF: LOVING AN ANGEL *Part-11 Pg-48* - Page 6

awesome!!!! 👏
gr88 yaar!!! 👏 👏 👏
esp loved the last dialogue of gauri n the hug!

Originally posted by: Kim_

😆 I got confused in the begining, I gathered that it's a song, but I was thinking it's about spending so I imagined it's in shoppping mall or somewhere, anyhow I was close atleast 😉 u were so close....dis part was abt shoppin datz y me gave dat song😆
nice writting style himu, like novels 😳 and I see that you have this flare for western music,😃 which is good   👏 thnx so much kim😳😃i luvvv hip hop and R&B😳


Pratham is getting bored of shopping 😆 he must be looking very cute, getting irritated, bust still sticking by, how sweet of him 😍 cuteee....u temme....😉....Pratham can neva b uncute wen im writin abt him....can he😉😆😆
but he'll never understand the excitement of shopping... yea!! u knw boyz....dey neva understand😕😆
hehehe and he is trying to understand gauri, he shouldn't waste his chota saa brain 😆 , girl's are always mystry 😳 chota sa brain😆i lyk da sound of it....galz r a mystery buh dis 1 gal gona giv Pratham a run😉😆😆

awww that is so sweet he can't live without her, and he knows that 😳 dey r best pals after all😳

awww she loves him, but she doesn't know, I think he doesn't know either he is sooo cute (guari's words are so beatiful 😳 ) luv!! mayb or maybe NOT😉😉

haa that perfect hug 😍 😭 yesh PERFECT iz da word! y u cryin tho😕😕


I love it 👏 👏 👏 thank you Himu 😳

kim *faint* i luv ur comments
jus lyk a review of da whole part
thnxxx so much🤗

Originally posted by: gk_09

Awesome Job Himu 👏 Your fanfic is greatt 😃

KN 😭

u finally read it😆
thnx so much gk😃

Originally posted by: Kim_

Hey I just watched the video of the song, so it's from 80s yeah, 80s music was really good, nowadays it's very hard to find good music, once in few years a song comes that touches your heart (here I'm talking about american/western music only)

it was really good, I also have few favourite songs from 80s...

thanks for sharing himu😃 (appreciated😳)

nah kim ur mistaken here a bit
da song came out in 2005!!

itz one ma fav dance numbers😃u can really move it to da beats init😆😆

glad u lykd it😃

Originally posted by: stylishgal

hiya himu. i love the song u put at the beginning. its one of ma favz. love the story so far. keep going on the same way. the story is shaping up very well

me luvz da song too
u can really move it up to it😳😆😆
thnx so much simran😳😃

Originally posted by: sanober88

thnk dear by the way u r rocking kutumb forum .. so plz continue!!! i agve a good idea foor ff right?😆

haha! yea kinda rokin it😆
yea ur post was da main reason i started writin da ff😆😆😆
i thot i was da 1 to mention abt ff so y not i start it only😳

Originally posted by: Kim_

yeah her fan fic is really adicted and very different from other fan fic, well, I've hardly read any other but I tried reading but nothing got me adicted like this😆

great story line, (PM looks so cute) and very well written👏👏👏

kim thnx 4 dose luvly words
glad i cud make u addicted......😆

u seem to jus luv da PM in dis story😆😆im happy abt it😆

Originally posted by: hiten_fan

awesome!!!! 👏
gr88 yaar!!! 👏 👏 👏
esp loved the last dialogue of gauri n the hug!

thnx so much ragz
da hug🤗😍☺️

Originally posted by: gaurihiten fan

awww himu,the part was so cute 😳 ,it ended so soon 😭 soon! i thot i wrote so much dat i wud bore u ppl😆😆
the hugs,peck on cheek is just perfect 😳 😳 😳 ,Pratham hai hi itna kissable 😆 😆 kissable!! aah....hu wud knw betta dan me😆
both love each other so much,awww 😳 😳 😳 dnt be so sure abt it already😉
Pratham hates shopping bt he is still with Gauri on her shopping,with her,aww that's called dosti 😳 ,the true love 👏 yea.....Pratham iz jus a sweetheart😳yea!! tru friendship😃no comments on da luv tho😆
n Gauri,that gurl is surely vry moody,stubborn 😳 bt loves Pratham dearly 😃 ,she even dn't knw that she is in madly love with her best frnd 😳 😳 😳 yea!! dis Gauri iz gona outdo Pratham Mittal in being a brat! dat i can assure u of😆😆take it a lil easy on da luv part....lots to go thru😆
himu,u rock mannn,u totally n completely rockk dost 👏 thnx so much sujata😳😃
last bt not the least post the 3rd part jaldi himu 😳 ,u can see the craziness of ur fanfic among us 😳 i ll try postin it quick enuf!!😃

sujata thnx so much!!
ur comments r alwayz wonderful!!😳😃

Originally posted by: Himu

kim *faint* i luv ur comments
jus lyk a review of da whole part
thnxxx so much🤗

hehehe😆 I'm glad you like my comments

ya Pratham always looks cute and you make him look cuter😃

hehehe are you trying to give us heart atack by saying "maybe not"😆

I was crying because I litterly got tears in my eyes while reading, (seeing them hug each other), 😳it was so touchy😍

ya I got addicted😃 I love this story😃 cool you wrote,

PM is so young and happening, which we don't get to see in serials nowadays😭😭😭

and I love your teen style writing😳

[quote=Himu]nah kim ur mistaken here a bit
da song came out in 2005!!

itz one ma fav dance numbers😃u can really move it to da beats init😆😆

glad u lykd it😃 [/quote]

😆 it's not 80's

see, my awareness of western music😆😆😆 I'm total zero there😆

but it sounds so much like 80's good music😃

it's very cool, I thought nowadays they don't make such songs...

but it's really good and yeah a perfect match for shopping scene it helps you picture all the shopping atmosphere and mall and everything😃

👏👏👏

too good,

egarly waiting for your next part😃

Edited by Kim_ - 16 years ago