Ehsaas - a fanfic - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
How Good Can You Be??? Omg!!!!! Continue Soon!!!!! I Am Falling In Love With Your FF .... Waiting To See An Update Soooooooonnnn!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
aahana ur fantastic. continue sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
y do i ve a feeling dat shwetaz gona b in trouble in dat party 😕 😆

awesome agn!!

update soooooon 😳

PS. I WANT MORE OF KARAN-SHWETAAAAAA 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
👏 👏 excellent aahana!!1
man u r such a creative thing yaar!!!
i really loved the way u have presented the story!!! luv ya for this ff...n sorry for sucha late reply.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Himu

y do i ve a feeling dat shwetaz gona b in trouble in dat party 😕 😆

awesome agn!!

update soooooon 😳

PS. I WANT MORE OF KARAN-SHWETAAAAAA 😆

thx himuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😆(i got ur habit now )

 4 the lovely words well i aint tellin u anything now just wait n watchn ya i'll put more of KS

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hiten_fan

👏 👏 excellent aahana!!1
man u r such a creative thing yaar!!!
i really loved the way u have presented the story!!! luv ya for this ff...n sorry for sucha late reply.

thx ragz 😳😳

i m glad u liked it gosh u really have me out of words thr with all those compliments wat else can i say but thx

n its ok pls dont be sorry v r friends i m  just glad u replied

will update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 7:

She reached town hall n asked for Mr. Bob to someone n said she was here as his assistant

The receptionist told her to enter a room at the end of the corridor door n go there

S followed her instructions n went in the last room

True to pappy' prediction a fat man was seating in his huge chair yelling on everyone

She went towards him n said hi I m shweta pappy smith has sent me over for being Mr. Bob' assistant

B: oh so u r shweta

S: yes

B: great I was waiting for u all right

Saying this he tried to bent downwards

S thought something was wrong with him so she went on her knees n asked r u all right sir

B: ya I' fine just trying to pick up this damn file

S: oh please allow me I 'll pick up

Just as shweta was lifting the file, bob farted.

To her disgust, shweta did not know where to look in her awkward position

She made a face n got up handing over the file to him

B (unperturbed): thanks now go thru this file n do one thing take care of all the arrangements n see all the requirements n details in this contract are done

S now realized what pappy meant n to her horror was a long list awaiting her to be done.

From flowers to music to the arrangement of the cutlery, she had to take care of everything

She thought oh god this is gonna be a real long day

Just then, she received a call on her mobile

There was a sales executive from a bank trying to sell some credit cards

Shweta said to her that she wasn't interested in anything yet she would' budge

Shweta hung up the phone saying I m really busy n Pls don't disturb me

Even after the woman called, her again n again irritated shweta put her phone on silent.

She then put her phone in her pocket n stared working.

In the meanwhile karan called her up again n again but shweta would' receive his phone, later he gave up n let it be.N over here unaware S was busy in her work.

Highlights of the next Part: Dashing Karan & err waitress shweta
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Posted: 16 years ago
🤣 farted!! 🤢 🤢 ewwww man!! fat git shud learn to controll da gases poofed in his huge belly 🤣 🤣

poor shweta!! she gota do so much stuffs!!

HIGHLIGHTS ve got me all swooning   😍 😍 DASHING KARAN.....*sigh*

cant wait!!

n next part betta b full of KS 😆 dere aint bn ne KS scene in da last part as well 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
I only read the first page yet, and you are at part 7 I'm so behind, thanks for letting me know about your fanfic ahaana...
it's really very interesting 😳
and Karan's character, wow 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey very nice aahana keep it up.u r so creative yaar gr8 👏