SecretSanta UPDATED LAST CHAPTER!!!!

Posted: 16 years ago

Hii guys...this is my third fan-fic!

But i wrote this all by myself..no zumans help here😭

And i promise that i will not stop upadating like Harri Puttar and Marauderz.

Cause i've already completed this fan-fic.

Its a small fic...With my fav charectars and shipping my fav couple...

James/Lily.

Plz..read and review.

I hope you guys like it.

*Fingers crossed*

 

Here it goes:

*Disclaimer*

The charectars you recognize do not belong to me

{althoughi do hope they did!}

 

Month of December and the castle of Hogwarts looked more dream-like and enchanting.

Everyone was very excited about all the Christmas activities that would take place. Christmas time in Hogwarts was always wonderful! Classes were cancelled, There were music recitals, Christmas competitions {who makes the best moving and talking snow man et cetera} , December parties, Official snow fights and 'Secret Santa'- What everyone looked forward for.

And that game changed a lot of stuffs!

 

'The snow ball fight will be so cool; we'll show those slytherins' Sirius told the marauders, as they walked out of the last class for the year. 'Yeah' James agreed. 'We got to win it this time!'.  But then some noise caught their attention, they turned back to see a pretty girl slapping Peter. Peter, looking humiliated and dismayed joined them. 'Whoa…that was harsh' Sirius said laughing. Peter grunted. 'Why do you even try?' James wanted to know. 'I don't want to be the only dateless guy for the December prom like last year' Peter said. 'Don't worry, you'll get a date'. James said. Sirius, Remus and Peter raised their eyebrows. 'I'm sure the giant squid will oblige' James joked. Sirius laughed, Remus shook his head smiling and Peter scowled. 'Thought that was funny potter? You know you've got a very dry sense of humor' someone said. They turned around to see a very pretty emerald-eyed, red-head standing there. Instead of looking offended James smiled. I love your attitude, He thought. Looking at her. She turned towards Remus and said with a smile 'Hey prefects meeting tonight at 8:00'. Remus nodded. 'But... im busy at 8:00' James said.

'Hope you don't make it'Lily said without turning her head.

 

AT 8:00 PM

Lily was waiting for all the prefects in the empty classroom. Most of them had arrived, but James and some other hadn't. Wheres he? She thought desperately.

She dint have a clue what had happened to her, all of us sudden James seemed so cute to her, his pranks dint seem stupid but funny, his company wasn't annoying by fun!

And come on James was a nice guy, you couldn't deny that fact. He really liked her, she could tell that, After all he stopped hexing his juniors {Snape was a exception},  And he asked her out practically all the time!

 'Im here' James said as if answering her thoughts. She turned around, to see James standing there, looking as usual really good. 'I  hoped you wouldn't make it'.

'Oh please, you were just hoping that id make it'

'Hogwash!'

'Why don't you just admit that you like me?'

'Cause I don't'

'Who are you kidding?'

'You really think that I'd fall for you?'

Man! How does he manage to look good all the time?

'I don't think. I know you've fallen for me'

I hope!

'Snap yourself out of your dream world'

'Does it matter? Id still like you..n vice versa'

Aww..thats so sweet, Lily thought.

'Eww…I absolutely cant stand you!'

'Fine!'

'Excuse me?'

'Uhh….Am sorry Lily!'

Lily raises her eyebrows.

You've got to be sorry! You make all the girl's heart beat go double time faster!

'I've always been irritating you…I mean you've told me about a million times that you hate me!...but sorry I still bugged you…I couldn't help it!...But now I wont!'

Lily looked shocked {and miserable}

Yeah! Its working…Thanks Sirius. James thought happily.

What? No…No ways! Lily got lost in her thoughts.

'Lily?' Remus tapped her on her shoulders.

'huh?'

'Lets begin?'

'What?'

'The meeting Lily….shall we begin?'

Lily nodded. Recovering herself she turned towards James and said 'Thank God! It you 5 years to get it?'

And so the meeting began, with James with great difficulty making no effort to flirt with Lily!

'I really hope I get a nice secret Santa!' Lily's friend Isabella said as they walked towards the 'secret Santa' table.

'I hope I get a rich secret santa' Lily's another friend Hannah said.

I just hope that James would get back to his normal self! Lily thought.

'Why do you look so sad Hun?' Isabella asked her.

'Nothing….' She muttered.

And just then the marauders passed by.

Isabella, Hannah and Lily. the three friends looked at them with some kind of enthusiasm.

'Hey did your realize James dint ask you out? Or say hi? Or smile? Or wink?' Hannah asked Lily.

'Uh-huh…he told me last night'.

'WHATTT?'

'He apologized and told me that he will stop asking me out…'

'Aw…don't worry, he will start asking you out again…he wont be able to stay alive otherwise' Isabella said with a smile.

Lily dint bother to defend herself this time, like she does always by saying 'Ohh Ouh-lease, I don't like James!'.

As they approached the table \, where the secret santa box was kept, they saw The guys writing down their names and putting it in the box. Sirius took another slip of paper and wrote his name again. 'I really don't mind two secret santas…' he said as he slipped it inside the box. But the paper rose in the air and burnt itself. 'Oh man! Sometimes I hate magic!' Sirius muttered. Everyone laughed. After the guys the girls wrote their names and put it in the box.

'Okay you can pick up the slips now' Professor Slughorn said, walking around with the 'Secret santa' box in his hand. Everyone picked up a chit.

Isabella: Christmas seems perfect!

Remus: Ohhkaay…not bad…

Hannah: Wow!

Sirius: No ways!!

Lily:  Cool

James: La Magnifica!

Hope you guys liked it...

will update the next part only if you'll like it!

 

 

Edited by zoya24 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx Labib...i know u dont like James/Lily...
😊 but thanx anyways...
Posted: 16 years ago
wow!!wonderful fic zoya. 😳 😳 😳
Great round of applause 4 u. 👏
Personally speaking I liked it more than harri puttar.
Continue asap.My fav couple:Lily-James 😳 😳 😳
Posted: 16 years ago
awww its sooo cute..Please write more..and James/Lily are also one of my fav couples 👏
Posted: 16 years ago
cont soon i think u should
right more u r really good
without zuman!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!..love this fic..JL became my new favorite a few days ago!..so I'm going crazy!..I love how you started it😊
Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx all! 😊
IM really glad u guys liked it:)
Posted: 16 years ago
Originally posted by Bhoomi_fan


Hummmmmmmmmmmmmmph??????? who told u that i dont like james/Lily????? come on..they gave birth to harry😆

As far as i can remember, i said bad things about james coz that time we were actually fighting about Snape-James....i personally likie them...

 

LOL....you're right ...😆

Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx for those lovely reviews....heres the second part..

two more parts to go..

hope you;ll like this...i wrote it in hurry!

It was another chilly day and hogsemeade looked dream-like. Students crowded in the village, it looked happening and colorful. And everyone was busy buying gifts.

Isabella, Hannah and Lily were In a gift gallery, searching for the perfect gift.

'Lil's hows this perfume?'

'Nice..but isn't it too strong?'

'Is it...?'

'Yeah…..a bit, hey Hannah aren't you buying anything?'

'Nope' Hannah replied.

'Why?'

'Later!….'

Lilly shook her head, not understanding a word her friend was saying.

Anyways when the girls were almost done with their shopping, the marauders entered the place.

'What should I buy?' James was asking Remus.

'I dunno….accessories?'

'What? Earrings? Perfume? Bracelet? Anklets? WHAT?'

 'Padfoot aren't you buying anything?'

'Sure I am…later!'

'Hey pete what are you buying?'

'I thought of buying napkins'

'Good going!'

Then James noticed Lily. He pretended not to notice her and went to the aisle where she was standing.

Lilly's face turned as red as her hair!

She was expecting him to comment on something. He did not.

Why isn't he saying hi? Lily thought.

' I will not say hi..until you do!'

'I cant belive he is mad at me for such a small thing!'

'Man,  I cant belive I am actually doing this!

'Make the first move evans!'

'If not flirting…you can be friendly!..make the first move potter!'

'Hi' Both of them said at the same time.

At that coincidence, both of them blushed.

'Being a good santa?' James asked.

'Trying to be…you?'

'Uh-huh….dunno what to buy….i mean shopping for girls isn't easy is it?'

'Yeah..i know that ….am a girl…'

Oh so you got a girl eh? lily though ,a bit jealous.

'I noticed that…Uhh…I mean…'

'Uhhh…Ummm….It will be easier for you if you know what the girl is like…or what she likes….need help?'

'Sure…umm she is like really pretty….smart…stylish…..gorgeous….sweet…beautiful…creative…a ttractive…'

'As in this girl is really pretty?'

'Uh-huh'

OMG! He got Tashika! I hate her! She was always trying to get his attention!

'Why don't you buy her dungbombs?'

'WHAT?'

'I mean….accessories…shes pretty right? Lip gloss? Eye shadow? Mascara? …'

'Yeaaah….thanks…'

Sirius found the two engaged in a conversation!
James! You always spoil everything!!!!!!

'Prongs….what did you buy? Fast…we've got to go now….i have some work'

'You carry on. I'll come'

'No James come now!'

'Padfoot carry on!
'JAMES COME WITH ME!'

'Okay. Bye lily..'

Lily saw him pick a eye shadow without even giving it a proper look, and went to the cashier. He saw him talking to Sirius.

'Whaddya think you were doing?'

'Talkin…shoppin…'

'Sha up! You aint gonna talk to lily!'

'You think?'

'I don't think…I know!'

'whats wrong in me talking to her?'

'You want her doncha?'

'Duh!'

'Then put a sock in it….and do what I say!' sirius said.

When the marauders were at hogs head, james got a letter.

It read : Howdy! Potter…

Don't pressurize your tiny brain to know who I am…well...duh am your secret santa!!!!

Your first gift: Lily Loves cuddly stuffs! Teddy bears seem perfect!'

Love…S.S

James read it and smiled. The other tried to read it. James got up.

'Where are you going?' Remus asked.

'To buy teddy bear!'

'What?' they all asked surprised or rather confused.

'Lils get up! See we got our gifts!' Hannah woke Lily up.

Lily stretched lazily and looked outside the window.

It was another beautiful day!
 'What did you get?' Isabella wanted to know.

Lily tore open her gift, wrapped neatly in black and red gift paper. She opened it to see a very cute teddy bear! And around its neck was a tag that read 'I belong to the prettiest girl on earth!' !

'Aww..thats soo sweet!' Lily cooed.

She checked the card. The name was not given. Duh!

But it had a message : Have a 'wunnerful' day!

That's it.

Whose my secret santa? James? Nah. He doesn't know I like teddy bears. Only my closest friends know. Isabella or Hannah?. Lily wondered.

'See what I got?' Isabella said with a smile. She showed Lily a pretty pink tunic top.

'Isnt it cute?'

'Definitely!'

'And see what I got!' Hannaah said showing Lily a pretty beaded bracelet!

'That's beautiful!'

'Hey Lily you have another gift!' Hannah said noticing a blue gift in the side.

Lily saw the gift, yup it had been addressed to her.

She tore it open to see beautiful scented candles in it.

The card read: Nope! Im not your secret santa…But your secret someone! Hope you have a great day Lily….'

'Whose that?' Isabella asked.

That's just exactly what Lily wanted to know

'I got a stone!' Peter said.

'What?' Remus asked, raising his eyebrows.

Peter showed him a ordinary stone that was wrapped in a expensive paper.

James and Sirius laughed.

'Your secret santa totally loves you!' James joked.

'What did you get James?' Remus asked.

'Another letter' James said excitedly.

'Ohh…that's so wonderful!' Sirius said sarcastically.

'Shut up...!' James said.

Ignoring his excitement, which did not excite his friends

by any chance, they continued.

'I got this' Remus said showing them different colored straps for his watch.

'Not bad…your secret santa knows you very well…I mean how would he/she know your type of watch to buy straps for them? Someone has a close watch on you!' James said.

'I did not get anything yet!' Sirius moaned.

'Hey there's another gift for me!' James said opening another box, when he opened it….a hand came out and punched his eye!

Ouch!
And it started laughing!

A cruel, mendacious laugh!

 

Edited by zoya24 - 15 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by sumera siddiqui


wow!!wonderful fic zoya. 😳 😳 😳
Great round of applause 4 u. 👏
Personally speaking I liked it more than harri puttar.
Continue asap.My fav couple:Lily-James 😳 😳 😳

 

Thank You very much!!!! But Harri aPuttar is still ym all time fav....

THANX A LOT!🤗🤗🤗

@Tani91

THanx a lot!!!🤗🤗

 

@ madu1006...THANK YOU VERY MUCH🤗

am glad....u liked it..

@ JohnnyDeppsGirl

🤗THANX

 

AWW...IM TIRED OF HUGGING.....

THANX...I AINT TIRED OF REVIES THOUGH..😆

THANX A LOT U PPL R GR8!!!


 

@Krupa....Thanx..

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