My part is at the end in bold!
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She walked out of her chaotic house
and rushed to the bust stop to catch her bus. She would have normally
missed it, but today it was still there waiting, for some wierd reason.
To find out why, she stepped onto the bus, and inside it, she saw a
boy, about her age, standing next to the driver, who as soon as she
entered, said "Let's go".
The moment she heard his voice, something happened, her heartbeat fastened and she could hardly look at him..
She sat on the first best seat she could find, coz she felt her knees were going weak
The BOy asked: "Where do u want to go.."
"Wherever
you're headed." she replied. At this moment, she could not thing of
anything else to say. She was lost in thought. What relation did she
have with this boy that he made her feel this way? She glanced up at
his face. He had a crooked smile on his face and was pretending to be
looking through her seat window. No realization came to her.
It
was hard to explain what was happening to her. She could only know that
this was the first time she felt such a connection with someone. Was
this called connection or Attraction, or maybe what people know as LOve
at first sight...? She shyly looked away from him and started staring
out of the window, in order to get her feelings under control...
But
controlling her feelings was the last thing she could do..they were
creating havoc in her mind!!!!...She could feel the piercing dark brown
eyes watching her intently although she was trying to look outside the
window .."This is insane" ,she thought ,"few hours ago I didn't even
know this boy and now I am with him alone in this bus yet I am not
afraid, what's wrong me ???????" .....
Just as she was
drifting into some sort of a reverie about work, and the latest article
she had to submit, like as though he had read her mind, he asked "Where
do you work?" Broken out of her daydream, she replied "Elle, the fashion magazine." "I'm Karan. He replied." "Nisha" she replied, and turned to look out the window againg, blushing wildly.
As
she continued her act of gazing outside she felt a wave of familiarity
rushing in her mind.Those brunette eyes filled with naughtiness danced
in front of her reminding her of the Secondary School days she had
spent.She was astonished as the realization dawned -- She gaped at that
handsome young lad, the very first crush she ever had.
Yes, it
was him! The one guy who had broken many hearts at the school. The same
dark chocolate eyes, the chisseled fase, the dark hair with the slight
wave which made your fingers itch to touch its silkiness. If they
thought he was sexy then, now he was one hell of an attractive guy. She
gave a deep sigh, he probably did not remember her, who would remember
a girl who used to wear pigtails and glasses.
But, there was
hope. Just like when you have your first crush, you wish, that they
like you. Even when you know that there is no possibility, your heart
hopes. And so I sat there staring out the window, but not really
staring, just hopeing that he would say something, ask something. It
was his eyes that had first attracted me...
i remember i was
in year nine and i was in the canteen and i was walking over to a table
where my friends were sitting when bam i hit someone and i dropped my
lunch and i nearly fell, when right in time the guy who had crashed
into me caught me before i fell, i had looked up and saw big brown eyes
that made me go mad...... he had said sorry and bought me another lunch
with his own money.
" hey , umm... want to go for a cup of
coffee?" he asked interrupting my thoughts and combing his hair with
his fingers. i look up at him, and reply " um..sure ok but i cant stay
for long ok?"
" that ok" he said and smiled, i practically felt as
if i would melt his smile was so sweet and cute, and those eyes of his
seemed to become bigger and more awesome every second.
The bus stopped outside a bus stop close to a cafe.
we both got out....
It
was crowded in the cafe but he spotted a table in the corner and he
steered towards it. He pulled a chair out for me to sit down. He leaned
back and gave one of his cute smile again, 'What would you like to
drink?' For a moment my eyes could not pull away from his his. If felt
my cheeks flush and gazing away, almost whispered, 'Just coffee.'
I
looked away, outside, pretending to be interested in the cars, rushing
by. I could still feel his eyes on me. This was the moment, the chance,
to talk to him, ask him if he remembered. I knew he wouldn't, but there
was again that little ray of hope in my heart! "Soo..." I said turning
to look at him, with a small smile...."""""""""
................"So (he answered in his heavy
baritone as if expected my question) I'm a fashion designer. I
recognised you as soon as I saw you. How would you like to join me?"
I opened my mouth as if my dream come true. I repeated his
sentences in mind to make sure my ears didn't fool me. So he recognised
me. He remebered me. But how? We hardly spent time in the school.
Ofcourse I didn't change much since schooling except my womanly shapes.
I blushed myself and swallowed. I should take decision right now before
his offer lapses. I stopped my flow of thoughts and got ready to reply
to his offer.
After
repeating his words 10 times in my mind and takin a deep breath..ii
replied..realliiee.?? but how..?? i notice while thinking for my
repliee his brown eyes were just staring at meh soo ii looked outside
the window tryin not to lose my slef in his eyes just then he
rpelied.".well ii had seeen yhu around..but u look different wid ur
glasses off..actualiiee preety will be the word fitting the
situation..u look preety without them"..as soon as he said those word
ii was up in the sky...it was like i wanted to kiss the sky and dance
all around the world..my first ever crush called meh PRETTY...my
repliee to his response was a smile..it was not a regular smile it was
a big cheezy one..ii loooked outside the window making sure that he
doesn't notice my happiness...just then...
I saw her..that
girl who could wreck this entire moment with him..I just felt like
grabbing him before she tries to steal him from me..but I was no one to
do that..but she was the one who actually had the right to do it...all
I could do was curse my fate! Life shouldnt be unfair to me! I know I
was making a big issue of a small thing but she owns him..........
She walked towards our table. She was wearing a mini skirt. She headed for our table and sat down next to him. "Hi aditi!" he said looking at her. "Aditi this is Nisha and Nisha this is Aditi my sister. She was supposed to have coffee with me and discuss her projects with me but then i decided that you can join us and should!" He said looking at me I was so glad that Aditi was only his sister. I laughed at my possessiveness. "Hi! Aditi" i said smiling at her. "Aditi i have decided to take her for my next project. What do you think?" he asked her. She looked at me and said....
Edited by PrincessSonshu - 14 years ago
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