A wedding Story(page 6) - Page 4

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this is gettin good i will contiue jus have to catch up rite now 😳

😡 why did u give him blood cancer 😉

Originally posted by: ~~BaBy~AnGel~~

cos no one is continuing i will

KK: acha ab tum is ladke ki side lo gi vo ladka jisne tumhare hone vala pathi ki jaan li
manya was going to say something just as the docter came out
M: docter karan kaisa hai
D: he is still critical but he has improved
M: kya hum karan ko mil sakte hoon
D: teek hai lekin siraf ek hi jana ja sakta hai
K,M: mujhe lagta hai ki manya k jana chahiye
D: teek hai, manya tum mere saat chalo
the dcter took manya in to the room that karan was in. manya wakled in and found karan lying on the bed looking very weak, manya saw karan and she started to cry
K: manya ji math ro, agar tum ne rona shuru kar diya toh main bhi ro paroon ga
they both laughed and manya sat next to karan
M: karan i'm sorry yeh sab meri galati hai
manya looked up at karan and he had his eyes closed, manya shook him hard trying to wake him up
M: karan utto ankey holo karan tum mujhe choor ker nehi ja saktay KARANNNNNNNNN
manya was just about to walk out to call the docter when someone got hold of her hand. she turned around and it was karan.
K: kya maine tumhe dradiya
M: yeh sab ek mazak tha karan
K: i'm sorry manya ji, lekin main yeh dekna chahta tha ki tum mujse kitna pyaar ker thi ho
M: karan aise kabhi math karna tumne toh meri jaan hi nikal di
karqan laughed and hugged manya and behind them was akash, he had come in to apolagize to karan.later that evining akash was walking alone in the hospital garden thinging about the time that he pretended to drown and manya saved him even though she couldn't swim, as akash was walking a hand stopped him and when he turned around it was roopa.
A: maine bohth der kardi roopa,
R: nehi akash aisa math kaho
A: main aur kya kahoon roopa tum mujhe batao
R: manya ko sab sach bathado
A: main kya kahoon manya ko, ki main ussai pyar kerta hoon aur humari shadi nehi ho rahi hai kyunki main ussai shadi ker na chahta hon, nehi roopa ab manya ki zindagi main karan a gaya hai, maine pehle bhi manya ka dil tora, yeh keh kar ki main tumse pyar kerta hoon lekin ab nehi, ab main manya ko kush dekna chahta hoon.
roopa just smiled at akash and they walked off home nt nticing that there was someone who was standing behind them who had over heard everything
Persn: akash fikar math karo main tumhe tumhara pyar lauta doonga, kunki sirf tumhara hak hai manya par, main aur mera pyar haar gaya tumhare pyar main zada takat hai.
that person was karan and he had a file in his hand that said

the reports were posative
karan verma has blood cancer
at last stage.............................  😲

mind if i change the last part to tha the person listening was manya and she feels affection again for akash and nowis in a real dillema

Originally posted by: kalapacho

mind if i change the last part to tha the person listening was manya and she feels affection again for akash and nowis in a real dillema

ofcourse i don't mind u can change it if u want, so nw ppl it was manya who heard akash and it is your choice if u want to give my vry cute karan blood cancer

and don't think i hate karan thats why i gave him blood cancer, i love him as much as u do but everyone said that they want manya to get with akash

its not that i love him i just hate it when people die 😭

when are you putting next part plzzzzz contuied

ok guys im continueing the story is gettin goood!
ok

Manya feeding karan and has tears in her eyes also. KAran is unable to see this he tells her please dont cry Manya do u know how much i love you i cant see you sad.

Dr.- Karan ab tum garh ja sakte ho
K- Thanku dr. but mere pas iktna waqt hai
(manya is unable to hear this and leaves)
Dr.- Karan tumhare pas sirf kuch weeks hai
K- ab mai manya ka karuu voh tho mere bena marjai ge.

(mnaya takes karan to her house)

Karan is sittin by himself thinking that maybe if he shows amnya that he ahtes her and gets mad at her it will be easier for her to forget him. Manya coes gettin him water)

M- karan lho paani pelo
karan takes the glass and and thorws it!
K- mujhe tumhari koi jeez nahi chahye
M- karan kya hua
karan raises his hand about to hit manya. manya stops his hand in a quick reflex and twists it behind his back.
M- karan yeh mat bhulna ke mai ek police officer hun!!!
    AKASH COMES IN
A- im sorry i think i came at a bad time 😆
M- nahi Akash come in (she looks at KAran with a evil eye)
K- im leaving! 😡
A- yeh karan kho kya hua
M- pata nahi achanak hi..anywayz tell me rupa kasi hai
AKash looks down unable to answer
A- Manya we broke the marrige
   Manya is shocked!!!
M- kya but kyun kya hua?
A- vho manya..mai..manya..mai tumse pyaar....
    Dadu comes in before Akash could say anything! 😆
D- Manya beta tumhari liyea Om ka phone hai! 😛

ok someone conitune! 😛
Edited by ana1 - 16 years ago

no one can contuied u have to contuied ur good at it reallyy i just loved ur story a wedding story plzzzz contuiedd

hey i thought u were gonna change the part of where karan is dying. wasnt it supposed to be maanya the one hearing akash's convorsation not karan? plzzzz dont make karan die. this story is supposed to be the wedding of karan n maanya's.