Love Actually.. a FF.. part 4- page 7 - Page 2

i like it post 1st part soon 👏

ok guys. i managed to right out something and post the first part.. its not up to the mark but i hope u guys like it..

Short forms that will be used:
Sania-S
Adi-A
Riddhima-R
Vikrant-V
Nikhil Oberoi-N.O
Shalini Oberoi-S.O
Sunil Malhotra-S.M
Namita Malhotra-N.M

PART 1…
Malhotra House. A Beautiful apartment in suburban Mumbai… One of most post areas- Bandra Bandstand.

N.M- Sania get up.. come on.. Its 9 a.m. ur getting late for college.. get up..

S-Mom 5 minutes please.. I had a late night.. I slept at 3.. Please mom..

N.M- U'll never listen to me will u? how many times have I told u relax on Sundays. Don't go out partying all night. But u girls will never listen.

S- Fine mom.. im getting up..

(After 5 mins) See. Im up now. Happy?

N.M-Thanx.. Its like u've done me a favour.

S- Mom.. stop it. Please.. ok.. I need to get ready.. c u at breakfast..

After 1 hour..

S- Mom do I luk alright.. its my 1st day after mid-term break.. I gotta luk good..

N.M- u look fine… Don't worry..
S- ok… thanx mom.. u woke me up early. I still have like an hour for college to start.

N.M- but don't u have to pick Riddhiz up..

S- Oh yeah! I forgot about Riddhima.. But its ok.. I'm still early..

N.M- alright.. So how was the party last night?

S- Oh mom.. it was awesome.. I had a blast.

N.M- well im glad.. u better get going now..

S- yeah.. bye mom. Cya … I'll see u in the evening..


Outside Riddhima's house..
S-Driver please horn bajao. I don't know whatz with this Riddhima gal..

S- ( trying to call up Riddhima) Riddhiz where are u.. Im waiting outside..

R- Sorry.. I was on the phone with Vikrant.

S- yeah. I thought as much. Did u have a good time last night..

R- yeah…

After a few moments of silence.
R- Sanz do u remember that guy I was telling u about?

S- Now which guy?

R- Remember the one who liked me when I was really small but I always hated him. Our parents then stopped talking coz they had some problems with each other in business.. Remember?

S-Umm.. Wait. Let me think. Are u talking about Aditya Oberoi.

R- well.. yes..

S- gal where did u remember him.. u always hated him..

R- I thought I did. But I was wrong..

S- what do u mean??

R- Umm.. Well….
S- come on.. tell me..
Wait a minute. Are u in love with him?

R- u can read my mind. Yes I am in love with him..

S- OMG!!.. u hated him soo much. I haven't really seen him in a while though.. hez not even been on Page 3.

R- yeah.. he happens to live opposite me..

S- wow.. thatz great. But..

R- But what? Are u thinking about Vicky(Vikrant)?

S- yeah.. poor thing. He loves u so much.

R- oh don't worry about him.. Im just passing my time with him and so is he..

S- Riddh I think ur wrong. I agree he is quite a Casanova but he really loves u.. cant u tell.

R- chill out Sanz. Im sure about him. But I love only Adi.

S- its been a while since I last saw him. Does he look the same.. he always looked awful.. No offence but thatz the truth.

R- trust me he looks like a greek god now. Like really hot..

S- I gotta see this guy. Which college?

R- How will I know?

S- alright then.. I'll find out.. …… we've reached..come one.. therez Vikrant..

R- yeah. I can see.. and I can see someone else next to him.. I don't know who it is but he seems to be very hot..

S- well lets go check him out…

A tall, fit good looking guy dressed in a blue t-shirt and a pair of well-fitted blue breaches is standing next to Vikrant… All the girls are looking at him but hez got his back facing all of them… Everyonez wondering who this mystery man is….

Highlights- Whoz the mystery man? keep guessing.. More later..

I hope u guys like this part. Its not very good but, its my first attempt.. sorry if I've made any mistakes..
Hope u guys enjoy it..
😊

Edited by stylishgal - 16 years ago

Hi simran..great intro n 1st part.. 👏 👏 👏
luved all f ur casting..i specially luv ur choice 4 sanya's parents..i guess cz i always wanted 2 see t happenning n screen..lol 😳
anywa cant wait 4 t 2 start btwn sanya n adi 😳
hp R stays vikranth's 4ever..n totally unlyk Tanya..
anywa sweety post da nxt prt soon ..cant wait 2 read da nxt part.. 😳

hey guys.. im glad u liked it..
will try and post next part soon..

sujata u will have Adi-Sania scenes but not now.. ur gonna have to wait 😊

princessunara im glad u liked all the parents. 😊 even though they dont have a big part in the story, i included them 😃

guys dont worry. i havent planned to make Riddhz like Tanya at all. shez a very sweet, positive character. 😊

simi wow nice part.
I luved it... sania is so differ as happy go lucky guy.

so in nxt part my adi will b shwn.

thx 4 wonderful ff

hey simi congrats on the new ff
gr8 start gal 👏 👏
n thx 4 mentioning my name i m truly honored u feel tht way 😳

Originally posted by: aahana86

hey simi congrats on the new ff
gr8 start gal 👏 👏
n thx 4 mentioning my name i m truly honored u feel tht way 😳

hey aahana..

its my pleasure. and i am honoured that u liked it.. coz its not even half as gud as urs.😊 ur a pro man.. and himu's and ur FFs are like par excellence.. this is nuthin compared to them😊 but im trying and making it as gud as i can😃

Originally posted by: k-ekta fan

simi wow nice part.
I luved it... sania is so differ as happy go lucky guy.

so in nxt part my adi will b shwn.

thx 4 wonderful ff

hey.. im thrilled u liked it..

its u guy's resopnse that keeps me goin😃

yeah sania is different. infact i've made her character alot like i am in real life.. and riddhima is alot like my best friend.. on the contrary, all the characters are like real people i know..

Adi might be shown in the next part😉 or maybe its sumone else😃 

ur gonna have to wait and watch😃

hey thanks a lot for posting the first part. It was great. Don't worry we will definitely wait till your exams are over. I hope the Mystery man is Aditya Oberoi, the way u mentioned him . I really liked that u have given Rakshanda a positive char , not haivng any influence of tanya😊 Great part and all the best fo your exams 😊

hey good intro & i'm luking 4ward 2 da nxt part.keep it up.i'm glad tht u named hitz character as adi 😳


da guy standing beside vikrant iz not adi 4 sure coz tht wud b quite an expected thing & u won't do tht lolzz 😉

writting a ff iz quite time consuming ,so all da best & get adi-sanya together asap coz we want that 😊

 

i had conceptulised a story wid da same name'love actually'& its actually da name of a superhit hollywood flick,i'm sure just like me u've got thiz name frm there only

Edited by cool_time - 16 years ago