Welcome KDMHMDians🤗
Its TIME! Yes Yes! Its time to vote for our very own Scene Contest enteries!
We didnt recieve a thundering response, but something is better than nothing right?😉
But some RULES before voting, yes yes, another batch of silly rules😭
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Participants who sent MORE than 1 entry can vote for ONLY 1 of thier entries.
DO NOT create multiple ids to vote, if found doing so, than your entry WILL be disqualified.
Please look into that each scene has atleast some talking between two characters.
DONEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Entry # 1
There were guests, servants, flowers, food, dresses, everything was a mess. The wedding was today but still, nothing was done, The bride wasnt even ready, and the groom would come any minute. Meher ran upstairs to Heer's bedroom, all dressed in Blue, and knocked.M: May I come in dee?
On the other side, Heer replied: Sure.
Meher came in, carrying a wedding dress, but was amazed to see Heer already decked up as a bride, red dress, jewellery. She looked like an angel. Heer shyly turned to face Meher.
H: So how do I look?
M: Beautiful
Just than some girls came knocking in, and said "The baraat is here".
Meher ran to see the barat. While Heer's heart pounded, this had to be a dream, everything was going so fast. Meher brought Heer down to the mandap where the groom, Prem was seated, and placed Heer beside him. The band started to play, the priest started mantras, Premeer exchanged looks, haars, took Saath Phere while everyone else clapped and cheered. The wedding was over. Heer was placed in her doli, and sent off with Prem.
Entry # 2
Ek Pal
Tayariyan dhoom dham se chalri thi....baarat annke ke waqt aagaya tha!!
Meher is standing on the terrece, impatiantly waiting for her pyaare se jiju, all of a sudden...!
Dhula aayaga! Dhula aayaga!
Lenghas rustle as the giggling girls rush down to welcome the grooms side!
Meher is sent upstaris to bring the dhulhan down!
Downstairs, Prem was wildly looking around.
*thinks*Where was she? Did she change her mind? Oh no! If that was the case he would lose his mind!"
Preet: "BB, ye lo....aaygayi appki jaan!!"
Prem looks up..........and is left speechless.
He couldn't believe he was such a lucky man. Everything about Heer was perfect...and he KNEW for sure it was true love. It couldn't be anything else, unless you counted pure love!
Heer and Prem were led to the mandap. The priest started reciting the prayers, while Premeer couldn't keep thier eyes off each other. Priest asked them to stand up for saath phere! Prem slowly stands as Heer is still sitting. He extends his hand and pleads with his eyes for Heer to get up. As Heer slowly extends her hand past moments are recalled. When thier hands meet, fireworks exploded. Saath phere were taken in the most purest way possible...Premeer don't let go the whole time! They sat down slowly for the rest of the rasams!When it was time to put on the mangulsutar, Prem jokingly put his hands toward his mother!
Gay3: *slaps his hand* "Badmaash!"
Prem: "Sorry Maa.....!"*smiles*
Gay3: "Ja ja! Saab jaanthi hoon mein! Heer ki aleva tum kiseko aankhe bhi uthake nahi dekhtha...!"
Heer blushes. The pandit offeres Prem the sindoor. Prem pinches some between his fingers and slowly looks toward Heer. He lifts her face with a single finger so she is looking at him and fills her mang while gazing intensly into her eyes! As Premeer have another moment...Gay3 walks to Lalit!
Gay3: "Dekho...Prem ki annkhon mein Heer ki liye kitna prem hai!"
Lalit: *wipes his eyes* "Saach mein...hamara beta Ram hai Ram!"
Gay3 pats his arm as they watch the newly wedded couple flooded in a sea of well wishers. As the guest start to head to the tables to eat, Prem lifts Heer's hands to his mouth and holds her close.
Prem: "Aab hum kabhi judaa nahi hoge!"
Heer smiles and looks down. Prem gazes at her with his eyes overflooding with the love for her. Both turn to watch Preet-Meher fight for Prem's shoes. They sighed. All was well.
~~End~~
***A Note***
This is not part of the FF but when the entries are posted, please post this part too!😳Written by Sonia aka mumpet so the entry is dedicated to her also!
"Sonia was standing among the wedding guests with tears in her eyes, watching her love Prem become someone else's!! She knew that even if she and Prem were already married, Prem liked Heer too, and she would now be demoted from his first wife to his second wife. She glanced at Shabo who was smiling and laughing watching her Bhaiyya and new bhabhi getting married, and felt a surge of jealousy! She was Shabo's first bhabhi not Heer!! She knew though, that Shabo had always wanted Heer as a bhabhi, and not her. When it came to Prem's Pyaar Potion, Shabo had saved it for Heer and not for her!! When it came to Prem's hot pictures, Shabo said not to look, because it was only Heer's right!! As much as she hated Heer, she loved Prem!! So she decided to go mope somewhere else and let everyone else enjoy the wedding. Atleast, she was still Prem's wife. She thought she heard her father calling her to study Geometry anyway!! So she stole some cake and other wedding food and left to do geometry."
Entry # 3
The whole place was illuminated with numerous little bulbs
Dozens of flowers adorned every corner.
The whole crowd was buzzing.
Somewhere beneath a fake and forced smile there was a heart that silently bled.
She sat numb as every one adorned her with jewellery.
The crimson red of her lehnga somehow dint show on her cheeks.
Her eyes were empty and at a time when they should have been filled with dreams and joy.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mkUESk7rErE
Kahin kahin se har chehra
Tum jaisa lagta hai
Tumko bhool na paayenge hum
Aisa lagta hai, aisa lagta hai
Oh ho, oh oh, oh ho ho ho, oh
'Didi aap jantey ho aap kya karne ja rahe ho' whispered Meher when others left.. 'Jee pao gaiy aap Prem kay bina'... 'Buss Meher ab aur kuch mut kehna, Mein kuch sun'na nahi chahti'....
Aur to sab kuch theek hai lekin
Kabhi kabhi yunhi chalta phirta shaher
Achaanak, achaanak tanha lagta hai
Tumko bhool na paayenge hum
Aisa lagta hai
Kahin kahin se har chehra
Tum jaisa lagta hai
Tumko bhool na paayenge hum
Aisa lagta hai, aisa lagta hai
There were another set of empty eyes in the same house that day.
Eyes that held its tear in and yet told tales of hurt, pain and love.
But there was a promise those eyes made and a heart vowed to fulfill.
Abhi yun milte hain humse phool chameli
Jaise inse apna koi - 2
Rishta lagta hai
Tumko bhool na paayenge hum
Aisa lagta hai
Kahin kahin se har chehra
Tum jaisa lagta hai
Tumko bhool na paayenge hum
Aisa lagta hai, aisa lagta hai
Oh ho, aah aah aah, oh ho ho ho ho, oh
Oh oh, aah aah aah aah
Aisa bhi ek rang hai, mm mm mm, oh oh
Aisa bhi ek rang hai
Jo karta hai baatein bhi
Jo bhi isko pehn le
Voh apna sa lagta hai
Tumko bhool na paayenge hum
Aisa lagta hai
Kahin kahin se har chehra
Tum jaisa lagta hai
Tumko bhool na paayenge hum
Aisa lagta hai, aisa lagta hai
Just as the brides were brought to the Mandap, the light went out and suddenly something flashed on a big screen. Gasping sighs and shocked and bewildered screams were blurted out. But a few minutes later something else played on the screen which caused even more shock.
'Heer hi Balwant ki beti hai' blurted a shocked Lalit...
A few dramatic minutes later Prem and Heer were joined not just in their hearts but in holy matrimony in grand style.
*Kiska chehra plays as Prem and Heer lost in each others eyes*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QLprWQbivAk
Entry # 4
Aina dekh kar woh khud hi sharma kar muskurayi..
Kya yeh sapna hai..
Khirki may say jhankte chand ki orr uss ne dekha...
Aaj chandni bhi muskura rahi thi.
Taare bhi uss ki kismat par rashk kar rahe thay...
Hawa bhi dheere se uss ki jhuki palko ko choo kar kuch gunguna rahi thi Aaj aasmaan bhi un ki shaadi may khil utha tha
*Chandni raat- Dil-e-Nadaan*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I7-xls0e0R0
Uss ki dharkan may aik naaam ka raag tha 'Prem'
Meher ki awaaz nay uss ko khayalo say nikala...
'Heer didi, Chand say baatein bahut ho gayein, tou .Chalo sub aap ka intezaar kar rahey hain....'Pagli..Meher Maa sach kehti thi na upar wala humey jodiyon may banata hai'…
Jaisey hi Prem ki nazar Dulhan bani Heer par pari.. Duniya tham gayi.. Uss ka wajood pighal gaya....
Sari Fiza gulaab kay phoolo se mehak rahi thi.
Par unn phoolo ki khushboo, nazakat aur raag kuch maand par gaye thay uss kay samney
Aur sub say barh ke uss ki ankho ki haya, woh khushi ka jhilmilata sitara
Uss ki ankhein bata rahi thi kay us ko apna Prem milney ja raha thi. Aik atoot rishta tou dono ke dilo nay bahut pehlay bana liya tha ab buss duniya ki rasm ki mohr lagni lagi thi..
'Aap dono buss aik doosre ko hi dekhte rahein, Mahurat nikala ja raha'.. Meher un ko Mandap ke paas lay gayi...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ZuL8bEmfCs
*Do sitaro ka milan- Kohinoor*
Entry # 5
heer in her dressing room alone,dressing herself for the wedding(wearing red lehnga) , prem without knowing
who is in the room entered into the room and get surprised to see heer,(heer sees back,),prem heer ko dekh kar muskara raha hei aur heer
sharma kar nazrein jhuka leti hei aur prem sochne lagta hei(heer aur prem dances softly on pehli nazar mein) aur uske baad prem heer ke
paas ata hei aur heer prem ko dekhte dekhte dewar ke saat ja lagti hei, aur phir prem kehta hei yeh sher
mohabbat mein nahin he farq jeene aur marne ka
use ko dekh kar jete hein jis kaafir peh dam nikle
heer prem ko side par karke sharma kar door chali jate hei,aur uska dopatta prem keh chehre par se guzarta hei,
heer still speechless,prem heer keh pass ata he aur kehta he tumhari isi ada ka mein deewana hoon,jub tum mere paas hoti ho
to woh ek ek lamha mere liye buhat kimti hota hei,heer prem ko dekh rahi he aur kehti he aur jub tum mere paas hote to
mujhe yun lagta he keh poori kainat mere paas a gaye ho(looking at each other)(pehli nazar mein song in the background)
aur phir ash kamre mein a jate hein aur prem aur heer ko dekh kar uske ankhon mein ansoo ajate hein(bcz ahd marriage broke from prem),prem aur heer ash ko dekh kar eik doosre
se peeche ho jate hein,aur phir ash kehti he bhi pehron tak to entezar kar lete(ash smiles),prem shys aur heer chehra jhuka leti he aur uske baad heer aur prem ki shaadi ho jati hein
Entry # 6-
Heer took in deep breaths and was overwhelmed by the air imprinted with festivity. Prem and her had chosen Balraaj's home for the wedding. There the lush greenery complemented the moon and the only music serenading was the slow whistle of the wind... Silent but powerful just like their love.
In the mandap, Prem gazed at Heer. Dressed in red, her raw beauty had a new radiance. Thus bewitched, his shy smile came back with a twinkle.
Looking around, Heer too finally saw his handsome face. The amalgam of determination and love in his eyes enveloped her in their warmth while flashes of their life together reached her... He would take her hand and protect her like he always had. She also felt the bliss of their nascent relationship. One day, he would twirl her around on learning their parenthood with the satisfaction of knowing that a part of them would be in this world. Later, in their old days, routine would settle in but through their laughs and tears, the wrinkles on their bones would be the testimoney of their lasting love.
Now sitting next to her, Prem whispered, 'Main tumse vaada karta hoon, khushi tumare saath hamesha hogi'
She looked at him and replied,'Tum ho to sab hain'
Smiling, they laced their hands and could not see life more complete.
Entry #7 -
It was a warm afternoon in mid-July. The hall had been decorated to both
Prem and Heer's taste. It had been decided long ago that when Prem and
Heer were to be wed it would be done in the grandest manner. Family
and friends had arrived from all over India and the world to witness the
union of Prem and Heer. This marriage was just an excuse too bind the
two in a never ending relationship.
Prem sat on the Mandap looking gorgeous in a black Sherwani, eagerly
awaiting the arrival of his bride. His Heer! He could smell the delicious
food being laid on the tables close by. He could hear his brothers
converse and his mother and sisters laugh away at his anxious state.
Soon, it all changed as Heer was brought down the stairs of the lavish
hall. She wore a beautiful but not too heavily embroidered deep-red
Lehnga. It wasn't something that had been seen ever before. Heer looked
splendid in it.
As she came to sit next to her to-be husband he naughtily whispered
something into her ear "Aaj tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho Heer".
"Prem! Sab dekh rahe hain." she argued.
"Dekhne do..aakhir in sab seh kya chupa hai. Waise bhi aaj humari shaadi
hai! Ab to sharmaana band karo" he proclaimed.
Everyone cracked up at their behavior. They truly were inseparable.
Entry # 8
The day certainly was a dull and dreary one yet it was the day of Prem and
Heer's wedding. The circumstances they were getting married in may
have been unusual but it was true, they were set to get married in this
small temple on the outskirts of Ludhiana with very few witnesses.
Prem had just been kicked out of his own house by his very own dad and
that too just because he was madly in love with Heer. Before anyone
could think of questioning his and Heer's relationship, he felt the need for
them to marry. Prem was still dressed in the rust-brown Sherwani he had
originally worn for his wedding to Ashlesha and as for Heer, she wore a
lightly embroidered red Sari with a matching diamond set. This was all
Gayatri could manage in such short time. However Heer still managed to
look splendid! Beautiful enough to have Prem's eyes on here throughout.
"Heer mujhe pata hai this isn't the wedding you had dreamt of. But I
promise Heer I'll make all your dreams come true." Prem assured.
"I know Prem. Mujhe tum par poora bharosa hai." she answered with great
ease.
"Itna bhi bharosa mat karo. Yeh na ho ek din tumhara mujh par yakeen
toot jaye." he joked but Heer immediately covered his mouth with her
delicate hands implying that day would never come.
Entry # 9
Finally the day of Prem and Heer's wedding day. 🤓😳The day that two people were apparently going to get glued together by the hip forever.😲😳 Heer's parents were running around the house trying to get things sorted, whilst Heer was upstairs applying the finishing touches to her dress.😃 Her sister Meher walked in and was stunned to see how Heer was looking. 😲😲😲Once a tomboy suddenly it was her wedding day...........
Meher: wow sis you look so nice *shocked face* once a boy suddenly become a girl.I wonder why
Heer: just sharap..Its my day so I gota look good what do you expect? Should I wear my nighty?? Would look awesome don't you think....
Just then Heer's mobile started ringing...the ringtone was
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VnEkDfU0CHc .
She looked at the name of the caller and it was Prem...She started blushing like a tomato.......
Prem: heyloww are you ready to be attached together forever??
Heer: No course I am. JJ Char dino ka lambii umarrrrrrrrrrrrr😃
She hung up the call...She loved messing around with him like this. 😳😆
Guests were arriving and you could smell the food from downstairs. Heer was ready for it..The boys side had arrived and took their places..Prem was sitting around waiting for Heer to come.
Heer stepped out of her room and then patashhhhhhhhh..she looked in horror at her saree. *shocked face* 😲😕😭
Entry # 10
The music was playing in the background.Tenu Leke
...Prem singing away in his head waiting for Heer to come...His dad came and spoke to him
Prems Dad: Are you ready for it then Prem?? The day your life gets put in the hands of a woman...Woohoo aren't you just excited.
He was being sarcastic.
Prem: Oh totally..I am looking forward to it...
A relative came and whispered something in his ear
Relative: this day you become your wife's slave..your ready for it aren't you? Listening to her orders...
Prem: ahh mar goli to that..We'll be each others slaves.
Heer was arriving..Guests took their seats and Prem was left staring at Heer...she was approaching.
She was being brought in by Meher and her mother. Wearing a red saree and a veil over her head. A few ladies were getting emotional seeing Heer as their own daughter being given away.
Heer took her place next to Prem and he said something in her ear and she started laughing loudly. Heer's laugh was awful, it was rather embarrassing for Prem who started blushing beside her.
The wedding was going on and ladies were gossiping away. It was time for Heer's farewell. Her family members gathered together and started crying buckets full. Prem came with a smart comment:
Prem: Don't cry too much, you might cause a flood and no one will rescue you.
Smugly looking on Heer and Prem left to start their new life together. And they lived happily ever after.
Entry # 11
Finally the much awaited day arrived!! The day where a dream shared by four souls would become reality. The truth of tomorrow. Premeer's wedding!
A barely awake Prem slouched on the mandap, many of the guests noticed his un-usual behavior. A man who was always so complete, dignified, awake and aware as well as elegant was slouching looking like was half asleep. He was yawning constantly.
Indeed Prem was half asleep. Preet his brother noticed all the gossiping by guests about his brother behavior and immediately came to his side to try and wake him up.
PR: Bhai!!! Utto!! Apne thandha paani se apno muh doya? Log aapke bare mein charche kare hai.
Prem who was obviously cranky frowned at his brother.
P: Sab teri wajhse hua hai! TERI!
Pr: Meri?!?! …. Dekhiye bhai..haan main manta hoon who bachelor party mera idea tha, lekhin aapko kisne kaha aap ka majood ho na zaroori tha..you didn't have to attend you know!
Pren tried to frown harder but instead ending up giving a HUGE yawn
P: *Yawn* Jo hogeya, soh hogeya..aab Here ko jaldi bula, warna mein yahi soh jaaongha..
Preet giggled..
PR: Bhai aaj aap itni tied hain, what you gonna do when it comes to the suhaag raat…look I have some red bull..its guaranteed to give you the energy you need to keep you awake. For the shaadhi and the suhaag raat…hehe
Preet winked at Prem and handed him over a red bull can.
(For those who do no know what Red Bull is; it's an energy drink that works! Haha)
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Prem eyes glittered at the sight of the drink he took one sip and then yawned. He took another a let the liquid flow in mouth and tickle his tongue…he took a third sip, then a forth one..in a matter of second he had finished the whole bottle.
Preet watched in amazement and grinned at his brother.
PR: BHai how you feeling!
Prem felt a an electric current through his body at once he felt livelier then ever!!
P: I FEEL GREAT PREET!!! ITNA AICHA MEHSOOS HORA HAIN!! HAHA
All the guests were shocked by Prem's sudden shouting, they all gave him strange look but it didn't matter to Prem he felt great!!
Finally Heer has arrived , everybody looked up and were astonsiehd at her beauty, she looked like an angel dressed in a beautiful red lengha, decorated beautifully.
Prem looked at her and began ginning hard!! He began doing a little dance because he was so happy..
Everyone
Finally the rasams started, while the pandit was chanting Prem keep fidgeting, he couldn't hold him self still, he noticed Heer hand next his hand. He giggled and gently placed his hand on her. This surprised Heer, she laughed gently. Prem felt a little naughty, he began tickling her hand. Heer wanted to protest she couldn't, she tried to retrieve her hand but she couldn't..
But luckily the pandit came to the rescue as he ordered the duo to get up and do the phera's. First it was Heer turn (sorry, may not be the right order) she began walking, but at a slow pace, Prem was bubbling with energy and Heer's slow place wasn't working him.
P: Heer, Quickly, quickly…You've run so many times, why can't you do so today.
Everyone frowned in amusement to Prem peculiar behaviour.
Finally it was Prem turn to lead, the moment they changed positions, Prem began running around the agni. Everyone laughed in amusement, while Preet tried to hide his face embarrassment. Here was finding it hard to keep up Prem.
But within seconds Prme turn was over. Heer was out of breath.
H: Ajj Prme ko kya hua (she wondered to herself)
Soon it was the for the bidaai, Prem watched Heer say good bye to her family, he was raring to go, he wanted to pick her up and run to his house.
Come to think about it wasn't actually a bad idea. (Pretend the Juneja's and Heers family
Were next door neighbors)
As Heer said her final bye, Prem was at her side, he picked her up and winked.
P: Dilwale Dulhaiya lehjayenghe.
Heer who was teary giggle at his words and let him carry her off, to their home.
Entry # 12:
Day of the wedding and Prem was nursing a hangover...
Prem: Ufff someone gimme a coffee...Man what day is it today...
Preet: Er hello bro, its your wedding day don't you know?? Or did you drink too much last night? Anyway, you better get dressed chop chop.
Prem: what its my wedding day??!?!? Who, what, when?!? How much did I drink last night??
Prem couldn't remember anything that happened the night before..Preet left whilst Prem was getting changed.
Guests were downstairs.....Prem was dressed and the boys side left for Heer's house.
They reached there and the band was playing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xq5xm69n5Fg&feature=relat ed
Prem was dancing away bindaas even though his head was hurting from the night before on his stag do.
They entered the house...and then the music was playing...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=89GFx_DOKkM&feature=relat ed
Heer was coming down and Prem was waiting for her impatiently..
There she was coming down..what a sight to see...He started singing to her:
Prem: saade naal rahoge toh aish nahin karoge..zindagi tu saare bhar aish nahin karoge *evil laugh*😈😈😈
Heer just gave him a smirk and got on with the ceremony.
Things were well on the way and everyone was enjoying. Next thing you know Prem was singing:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M_hPHiz57Ro
Mera joota hai japani, ye patloon Hindustani, sar pe lal topi hai phir bhi dil hai Heer ke paas.
Everyone was laughing and the marriage was complete.
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