Madhosh Dil Ki Dhadkan(LKT)-Part 6 Updated p.9 NEW

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Posted: 15 years ago

I have written a new Fanfic on Laksh and Kt. Its called Madhosh Dil Ki Dhadkan. Hope you comment on how the characters are so far. I will write the intro soon as I am really sleepy right now and took me hours to look for the perfect pictures for the characters. Love ya! 


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Hey guys. I am back after my long vacation to Myrtle Beach. I have started this new fanfic to give my other fanfic a little break. Sooner or later I will continue with it. Anyways I hope you like this Fanfic on Laksh and Krishna Tulsi. I am just showing the characters for now. I will introduce them after you guys comment on how the characters are. Hope you like them all.Love you all!!!!!

LOVE: Palchin

 

THE VIRANI FAMILY GRANDCHILDREN

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THE SHAH FAMLY GRANDCHILDREN

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WILL WRITE THE INTRO OF CHARACTERS SOON. DO COMMENT AND TELL ME YOUR VIEWS.

 

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**esha** thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
YAY another lkt ffs of urz
WILL READ SOON
thanx for lettin me no
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey thats great! 😊
Thanks for posting, I will definetly check it out. 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

The Intro of the characters is posted for Madhosh Dil Ki Dhadkan....Hope you read it! Here's the link.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=986854&T PN=2&#17340000

Palchin

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice intro
but i wish prem with heer

HARSHITI 4 EVER

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow another lkt ff? thts awesome, i'll definitely read when i get a chance! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
^^ditto!when i get a chance!!cant wait to read!
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Posted: 15 years ago

I Have put up Part 1 so feel free to read and comment. Here's the link!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=986854&TPN=2
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys I just Put up the Fanfic in this Forum for you guys to read...All you LKT FANS....Hope you like it will put up Part One and Two tonight....Hope you really like them and comment.
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
 

PART 1

Mumbai- 7:00am-Virani House(Shantiniketan)

It was a bright, sunny day at the Shanti Niketan. Everyone was awake by this time. Baa and Ganga were in the mandir doing pooja. Sahil took bhagwan's ashirwad, quickly ate breakfast which his bahu, Arpita had made for him, and left to go to his office. Arpita then did her pooja around the tulsi plant with Sargam. While they were doing the pooja around the tulsi plant, Raunak came from behind them and joined them.

S: Good morning Bhaiya....

R: Good morning Ms. Chipkali....(laughs)

S: Very funny....(gets a little angry)

A: Isse kyu sataa rahe ho....jao jaa kar apne bhai ko uthao....

S: Bhabhi, Mr.Kisna ko toh jaldi uthne ke aadat hi nahi hai....

R: Arre soone do usse....bichaara subhe paach(5) baje ghar aaya tha....

A: Woh kyu...(a little tensed)...

R: Ek important case tha...bahot research karni thi isi liye....

A: Sub tumhari galti hai....kya thodi bhi break nahi de sakte the....tum bhi naa Raunak....tum jaante ho ke stress accha nahi hota....aur upar se yeh sardi ki season....aggar mere devar(brother-in law) ko kuch hu naa toh....

R: Arre theek hai meri maa...age se inta kam nahi karne dunga....HAPPY...(smiles)..

A; Yes...aab usse utha kar atti hu...saath me nasta karenge....

R: Theek hai....Mai Ritvik ko uthata hu....

S: Mai bhi atti h aap ke saat...

Arpita heads inside and goes to Laksh's room while Raunak and Sargam to to Ritvik's room.

Pune- 7:00- Shah Niwas

It was a beautiful, new day. Everyone was awake in the Shah family. Purvi was doing puja to Lord Krishna. Purvish joins her and they both do the aarti together. As they turn around after finishing the aarti, they find their handsome son,Prem, standing there all ready. Prem comes up to his dad and takes his ashirwaad and then takes his mom's ashirwaad.

P: Godd morning mom...

Purvi: Good morning beta....

Purvish: Ready beta....

P: Yes Dad....(smiles)

Purvish: Par Krishna kaha hai.....

P: Arre mai usse hi uthane jaa raha tha...pata nahi jaagi hai ke nahi?

Purvi: Yeh ladki bhi naa....

Prem takes the prasad from his mom and goes towards Krishna's room.

 

MUMBAI-SN

Arpita enter's Laksh's room. She finds his sleeping with his back facing upwards and his face uner his soft pillow and a pillow covering his body.

A: Good morning Mr. Kumbhkaran.....get up( she walks up to his bed and taps his shoulder slowly...

L: Ummmm...Soone do naa bhabhi.....sab ko meri neend aur mere soone se hi kyu problem hai?.....bhaiya inta kam karvate hai....sargam itna loud music sunti hai ke neend bhi udd jaati hai....aur aab aap....

A: Arre aggar mera bus chalta toh mai tumhe soone deeti....par aaj ke din nahi.....

L: Kyu aaj kya hai.... .........naa hi koi match hai joh dekheni hai....naa kissi ka janam din hai.....naa koi pooja hai....phir kya baat hai(still has his eyes closed and is sleeping in the same position)

A: Tum uhtho toh sahi mai bataati hu...

Laksh slowly gets up to face heras she was now sitting on the side of the bed.

L: Kya baat hai...(now wide awake)

A: Aaj raat ko Prem aur Krishna yaha aarahe hai....

L: (really excited): What...?....

A: Haan....Unn dono ko yaha par job mil gayi hai.....Mom Dad aab Mumbai aane wale hai....I am so excited.....kitne saalo baad tum unhe milonge.....

L: Haa....Choti ma aur purvish uncle se toh mai aap ki shaadi ke baad kabhi nahi dekha kyunki mai padhai(studies) ke liye America gaya tha.....

A: Woh saab aaj shaam ko aarahe hai....

L: Theek hai mai unhe airport se lekar aaounga.....

PUNE-SN

Prem wakes into Krishna's room. He looks and finds her on the phone talking to someone. Her voice seemed to be very tensed. She was all ready wearing a beatuiful but simple red kurti.

Her hair perfectly staright and silky. She was facing the opposite side and didn't notice Prem come in. She hung up her phone. Prem tiptoed closer to her and hugged from the back which scared Krishna.

P: Good morning baby.....

K: Kissiko daraana ho toh aap se sikhe....(a little angry and tensed)..

P: Kya hua...?Kis ka phone tha....

K: Woh travel agent ka....hum jis fligh se jaa rahe the uss me sirf teen log jaa sakte hai....

P: WHAT????

 

THAT'S IT FOR THIS PART.....DO TELL ME HOW ITS GOING.....REMEMBER TO LEAVE YOU REPLY AND OPININS...HOPE YOU LIKED ME EFFORT....THANKS FOR READING AND SORRY BUT I DIDN'T EDIT!!!

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